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RE: Review of draft-ietf-bmwg-virtual-net-04

"MORTON, ALFRED C (AL)" <acmorton@att.com> Thu, 16 February 2017 13:19 UTC

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From: "MORTON, ALFRED C (AL)" <acmorton@att.com>
To: Joel Halpern <jmh@joelhalpern.com>, "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>
Subject: RE: Review of draft-ietf-bmwg-virtual-net-04
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Hi Joel,
Thanks for your review, please see below.
Al

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Joel Halpern [mailto:jmh@joelhalpern.com]
> Sent: Sunday, February 05, 2017 4:44 PM
> To: gen-art@ietf.org
> Cc: draft-ietf-bmwg-virtual-net.all@ietf.org; ietf@ietf.org;
> bmwg@ietf.org
> Subject: Review of draft-ietf-bmwg-virtual-net-04
> 
> Reviewer: Joel Halpern
> Review result: Ready
> 
...
> Document: draft-ietf-bmwg-virtual-net-??
> Reviewer: Joel Halpern
> Review Date: 2017-02-05
> IETF LC End Date: 2017-02-15
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
> Summary: This document is ready for publication as an Informational
> RFC.
> 
> Major issues:
> 
> Minor issues:
>     The second figure in section 4.4 talks about the use of multiple
> 3x3 tables, but appears to show the use of multiple 4x4 tables.  This
> reader found himself confused.

[ACM] 
The "3x3 matrix" refers to the cells of the table where 
user entries appear. The Header Row and Header Column
aren't included in the 3x3 matrix, but they do make the 
table appear as 4x4, as in the first figure of sec4.4. 
The Headings disappear in the second figure 
(due to size constraints), but the tables include
the 3x3 matrix as before.


> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
>

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