Re: Artart telechat review of draft-ietf-alto-multi-cost-08

"Mirja Kuehlewind (IETF)" <ietf@kuehlewind.net> Mon, 08 May 2017 12:15 UTC

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Subject: Re: Artart telechat review of draft-ietf-alto-multi-cost-08
From: "Mirja Kuehlewind (IETF)" <ietf@kuehlewind.net>
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Hi Martin,

just to double check: do you think this document is ready now and all your comments have been addressed?

Mirja


> Am 27.04.2017 um 13:57 schrieb Randriamasy, Sabine (Nokia - FR/Nozay) <sabine.randriamasy@nokia-bell-labs.com>;:
> 
> Hello Martin,
> 
> I just posted an update where the " Requirements Language" text has been moved in a section 1.1.
> As I saw it on a number of other ietf drafts, I also added the sentence 
> "When the words appear in lower case, their natural language meaning is used."
> 
> The update and status are available at https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-alto-multi-cost/
> 
> Thanks,
> Sabine
> 
> 
>>> -----Original Message-----
>>> From: Martin Thomson [mailto:martin.thomson@gmail.com]
>>> Sent: 26 April 2017 08:39
>>> To: Randriamasy, Sabine (Nokia - FR/Nozay) <sabine.randriamasy@nokia-
>>> bell-labs.com>
>>> Cc: art@ietf.org; alto@ietf.org; ietf@ietf.org; draft-ietf-alto-multi-
>>> cost.all@ietf.org
>>> Subject: Re: Artart telechat review of draft-ietf-alto-multi-cost-08
>>> 
>>> On 26 April 2017 at 03:26, Randriamasy, Sabine (Nokia - FR/Nozay)
>>> <sabine.randriamasy@nokia-bell-labs.com>; wrote:
>>>>>> This document doesn't cite RFC 2119, but it uses the keywords.
>>>> [SR     ] RFC 2119 is cited on page 1, section " Requirements Language" and
>>> section "9.1.  Normative References". Should it be referenced elsewhere?
>>> 
>>> The convention is to put those in the body, I missed it in the boilerplate.
>>> 
>>> I skimmed the other changes, and they look fine.