Re: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-circuit-breaker-11

Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net> Thu, 17 March 2016 08:30 UTC

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> WRT section 6.3.2 (now section 5.3.2) “persistently fails to deliver acceptable TDM service” is discussed in significant detail in Appendix A of the referenced [ID-ietf-pals-congcons] - it turns out to be a much longer discussion by comparison to section 6.3.1 (now section 5.3.1) that involves references to ITU-T G.826 and G.875.  I’d prefer not to reproduce or try to summarize that discussion in the tsvwg-circuit-breaker draft, but a sentence could be added to the end of that section to point the reader in the right direction, e.g.: “See Appendix A of [ID-ietf-pals-congcons] for further discussion.”

Sounds reasonable to me as well. Thanks for the review & fix!

Jari