Re: Colloquial language [Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bis-15.txt> (The Tao of IETF: A Novice's Guide to the Internet Engineering Task Force) to Informational RFC]
Ole Jacobsen <ole@cisco.com> Thu, 31 May 2012 08:14 UTC
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Date: Thu, 31 May 2012 01:16:52 -0700
From: Ole Jacobsen <ole@cisco.com>
To: Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com>
Subject: Re: Colloquial language [Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bis-15.txt> (The Tao of IETF: A Novice's Guide to the Internet Engineering Task Force) to Informational RFC]
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On Thu, 31 May 2012, Brian E Carpenter wrote: > On 2012-05-31 02:49, Peter Saint-Andre wrote: > > > > That said, I would assume that many potential readers of this document > > are not native English speakers. Thus I suggest that the more colloquial > > words and phrases might best be changed to more standard English. > > Have we any evidence that this is a problem for the community? The informal > style is one of the virtues of the Tao. I'd be sorry to lose it. "Informal style" does not equal heavy use of (localized) colloquialisms. My copy editor always reminds me that I have an international readership and thus should avoid such phrases as the ones listed by Peter. > > Maybe we can ask some of the people concerned, such as recent presenters > of the Newcomers tutorial in languages other than English. Sounds like a difficult thing to do with any kind of predictable or measurable outcome, although it might be fun to ask the Brits if they understand everything the Americans are saying and vice versa :-) "Having evindence" that someone did not understand a particular phrase gets into the weeds of cultural differences which go way beyond a group of engineers who don't understand the meaning of "approximately". I suggest we NOT conduct that particular line of questioning, really. > > Brian > Ole J. Jacobsen Editor and Publisher, The Internet Protocol Journal Cisco Systems Tel: +1 408-527-8972 Mobile: +1 415-370-4628 E-mail: ole@cisco.com URL: http://www.cisco.com/ipj Skype: organdemo
- Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bis-15.txt> … Peter Saint-Andre
- Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bis-15.txt> … Eliot Lear
- Mission statement [Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-… Brian E Carpenter
- Colloquial language [Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffma… Brian E Carpenter
- Re: Colloquial language [Re: Last Call: <draft-ho… Dave Crocker
- ICANN relationship [Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman… Brian E Carpenter
- Re: Colloquial language [Re: Last Call: <draft-ho… Brian E Carpenter
- Re: Colloquial language [Re: Last Call: <draft-ho… Dave Crocker
- Re: Colloquial language [Re: Last Call: <draft-ho… Ole Jacobsen
- Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bis-15.txt> … Yoav Nir
- Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bis-15.txt> … Dave Crocker
- Re: Making the Tao a web page Paul Hoffman
- Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bis-15.txt> … SM
- Re: Colloquial language [Re: Last Call: <draft-ho… Stephen Farrell
- Re: Colloquial language [Re: Last Call: <draft-ho… Klaas Wierenga
- Re: Colloquial language [Re: Last Call: <draft-ho… Simon Perreault
- Re: Mission statement [Re: Last Call: <draft-hoff… John C Klensin
- Re: Mission statement [Re: Last Call: <draft-hoff… Scott Brim
- Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bis-15.txt> … John C Klensin
- Re: Making the Tao a web page Fred Baker
- Re: Mission statement [Re: Last Call: <draft-hoff… Brian E Carpenter
- Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bis-15.txt> … Brian E Carpenter
- IANA [Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bis-15… Brian E Carpenter
- Re: Colloquial language [Re: Last Call: <draft-ho… Melinda Shore
- Re: Colloquial language [Re: Last Call: <draft-ho… Martin Rex
- Re: Colloquial language [Re: Last Call: <draft-ho… Yoav Nir
- Re: Colloquial language [Re: Last Call: <draft-ho… Ben Niven-Jenkins
- Re: Colloquial language [Re: Last Call: <draft-ho… Joel jaeggli
- Making the Tao a web page Paul Hoffman
- Re: Making the Tao a web page Nick Hilliard
- Re: Making the Tao a web page Peter Saint-Andre
- Re: Making the Tao a web page Fadi Mohsen
- Re: Making the Tao a web page John C Klensin
- Re: Making the Tao a web page SM
- RE: Making the Tao a web page GT RAMIREZ, Medel G.
- Re: Colloquial language [Re: Last Call: <draft-ho… John Levine
- Re: IANA [Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bi… Thierry Moreau
- Re: IANA [Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bi… Fred Baker
- Re: Colloquial language [Re: Last Call:<draft-hof… t.p.
- Re: Colloquial language [Re: Last Call:<draft-hof… Randy Bush
- Re: Colloquial language [Re: Last Call:<draft-hof… Yoav Nir
- Re: Colloquial language [Re: Last Call: <draft-ho… Thomas Nadeau
- Re: Making the Tao a web page Nick Hilliard
- Re: IANA [Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bi… David Conrad
- Re: Making the Tao a web page Russ Housley
- Re: Colloquial language [Re: Last Call: <draft-ho… Joel jaeggli
- Re: Making the Tao a web page Eric Burger
- Re: Making the Tao a web page John C Klensin
- Re: Making the Tao a web page Melinda Shore
- Re: Making the Tao a web page SM
- Re: Making the Tao a web page John C Klensin
- Re: Making the Tao a web page John C Klensin
- Re: Making the Tao a web page Lixia Zhang
- Re: Making the Tao a web page SM
- Re: Making the Tao a web page Dave Crocker
- Re: Making the Tao a web page SM
- Re: Making the Tao a web page Lucy Lynch
- Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bis-15.txt> … Paul Hoffman
- Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bis-15.txt> … Bradner, Scott
- Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bis-15.txt> … Paul Hoffman
- Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bis-15.txt> … John C Klensin
- Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bis-15.txt> … Bradner, Scott
- Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bis-15.txt> … Paul Hoffman
- Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bis-15.txt> … Eliot Lear
- Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bis-15.txt> … Bradner, Scott
- Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bis-15.txt> … Glen Zorn
- [Fwd: Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bis-15… Glen Zorn
- Re: [Fwd: Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bi… Randy Bush
- Re: [Fwd: Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bi… Ole Jacobsen
- Re: [Fwd: Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bi… Glen Zorn
- RE: [Fwd: Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bi… Yoav Nir
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- Re: [Fwd: Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bi… Ole Jacobsen
- Re: [Fwd: Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bi… Randy Bush
- Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bis-15.txt> … John C Klensin