RE: [Teas] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-teas-pce-central-control-04

Thanks Elwyn,

Clarified in the next revision.

Adrian

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> Subject: [Teas] Genart telechat review of
draft-ietf-teas-pce-central-control-04
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> Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
> Review result: Ready with Nits
> 
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> Document: draft-ietf-teas-pce-central-control-04
> Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
> Review Date: 2017-08-28
> IETF LC End Date: 2017-08-24
> IESG Telechat date: 2017-08-31
> 
> Summary: Thanks for addressing my Last Call comments on -03.  The new version
> is ready with one introduced nit.  Also I am still of the abstract is somewhat
> overlong.
> 
> Nit:
> s6, para 2: The SDN term 'northbound' has appeared in the new version. Needs
> brief explanation.
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> Major issues:
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> Minor issues:
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> Nits/editorial comments:
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