Re: Proposed New Note Well

Jorge Contreras <cntreras@gmail.com> Tue, 05 January 2016 00:18 UTC

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From: Jorge Contreras <cntreras@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, 4 Jan 2016 17:17:43 -0700
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Subject: Re: Proposed New Note Well
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