Re: Proposed Update to Note Well

Peter Saint-Andre <stpeter@stpeter.im> Fri, 22 June 2012 17:07 UTC

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On 6/22/12 11:04 AM, Marshall Eubanks wrote:
> On Fri, Jun 22, 2012 at 12:31 PM, Peter Saint-Andre <stpeter@stpeter.im> wrote:

>> Keeping it as short as possible, I suggest:
>>
>>   If you are aware that a contribution of yours is covered by
>>   patents, you need to disclose that fact.
> 
> Shouldn't that be
> 
> s/patents/patents or patent applications/

Yes.