Gen-ART Telechat review for draft-ietf-ccamp-rwa-wson-encode-28

"Peter Yee" <peter@akayla.com> Mon, 02 March 2015 04:48 UTC

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Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-rwa-wson-encode-28
Reviewer: Peter Yee
Review Date: Mar-01-2015
IETF LC End Date: Feb-19-2015
IESG Telechat date: Mar-05-2015

Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication as a Standards Track
RFC [Ready].

The draft specifies the encoding of information fields necessary for WSON
switching.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits:

I saw a few picayune nits in the document, but they're not worth pursuing at
this point.  Nice job cleaning the document up!