Gen-ART Telechat Review of draft-ietf-karp-routing-tcp-analysis-06

Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com> Tue, 18 December 2012 20:14 UTC

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Document: draft-ietf-karp-routing-tcp-analysis-07
Reviewer: Ben Campbell
Review Date: 2012-12-18
IESG Telechat date: 2012-12-20

Summary: Ready for publication as an informational RFC. There are still a couple of nits that might be worth consideration prior to final publication.

Note: This review is incremental to my review of version 05 at last call. All of my comments in that review have been resolved except as described in this message.

** Major issues:

None

** Minor issues:

None

** Nits/editorial comments:

-- The 2119 paragraph was removed, but there's still an orphaned 2119 entry in the informational reference section.

-- There's a new IANA considerations section. However, I suggest it contain a full sentence to the effect of "This document makes no requests of IANA" rather than simply "None".  (OTOH, this may get removed before final publication anyway...)