Gen-art LC (and telechat) review: draft-ietf-calext-rscale-04

Robert Sparks <rjsparks@nostrum.com> Tue, 03 March 2015 17:02 UTC

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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at

<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-calext-rscale-04
Reviewer: Robert Sparks
Review Date: 03-03-2015
IETF LC End Date: 03-03-2015
IESG Telechat date: 03-05-2015

Summary: Ready modulo one nit

This draft reads easily (describing the  actual work converting between 
calendars is hard, but this draft doesn't have to talk about that).

The body of the draft says it updates 5546 and 4791, but those are not 
listed in the Updates: line in the header?