Re: Proposed New Note Well

Tim Chown <tjc@ecs.soton.ac.uk> Wed, 06 April 2016 23:02 UTC

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Subject: Re: Proposed New Note Well
From: Tim Chown <tjc@ecs.soton.ac.uk>
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On 6 Apr 2016, at 23:33, Pete Resnick <presnick@qti.qualcomm.com> wrote:
> 
> Two things, neither earth-shattering:
> 
> Jari did say he thought it was still too long. The second paragraph (mentioning the patent policy) seems duplicative with what's in the second bullet and the list at the bottom. And of course the top-level message should be that first bullet: You have to follow all of the rules. Let's just strike the second paragraph.
> 
> In addition to the pointer to the documents at the bottom (which I presume will be links when this thing appears in HTML), it would be great to have a link to https://www.ietf.org/ombudsteam <https://www.ietf.org/ombudsteam> placed next to the line regarding anti-harassment procedures. That'll let people also find the IESG Statement and other info.
> 
I agree. And it would be good if it could fit legibly on a single slide, for use in the WG chair slide decks, even if it’s something that in reality gets all the attention of a pre-flight safety video.

As a slight aside, I noticed this week that at least one WG used the proposed template rather than the (I think!) current one. While the direction of the new text  looks fine, we should probably be careful about what we’re using if it’s not yet official.

Tim
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> On 21 Mar 2016, at 13:51, IESG Secretary wrote:
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