Gen-ART LC review of draft-leiba-cotton-iana-5226bis

"Roni Even" <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com> Tue, 24 May 2016 07:12 UTC

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From: "Roni Even" <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com>
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Subject: Gen-ART LC review of draft-leiba-cotton-iana-5226bis
Date: Tue, 24 May 2016 10:11:20 +0300
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Sorry for the late feedback

 

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you
may receive.

Document:  draft-leiba-cotton-iana-5226bis-12

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date:2016-5-24

IETF LC End Date: 2016-5-17

IESG Telechat date: 

 

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a BCP  RFC.

 

 

Major issues:

 

Minor issues:

 

I am wondering about the lack of normative language for example in section
4.11

   "When reviewing a document that asks IANA to create a new registry or
change a registration policy to any policy more stringent than Expert Review
or Specification Required, the IESG should ask for justification to ensure
that more relaxed policies have been considered and that the strict policy
is the right one."

Is the "should" normative here? 

 Nits/editorial comments: