Return-Path: X-Original-To: ietf@ietfa.amsl.com Delivered-To: ietf@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id C38D512B0D3; Mon, 5 Sep 2016 13:45:11 -0700 (PDT) X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com X-Spam-Flag: NO X-Spam-Score: -2.699 X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-2.699 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_AU=-0.1, FREEMAIL_FROM=0.001, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_LOW=-0.7, SPF_PASS=-0.001] autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no Authentication-Results: ietfa.amsl.com (amavisd-new); dkim=pass (2048-bit key) header.d=gmail.com Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id BVphLpDYfQgP; Mon, 5 Sep 2016 13:45:05 -0700 (PDT) Received: from mail-wm0-x234.google.com (mail-wm0-x234.google.com [IPv6:2a00:1450:400c:c09::234]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES128-GCM-SHA256 (128/128 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 1A11B12B469; Mon, 5 Sep 2016 13:45:05 -0700 (PDT) Received: by mail-wm0-x234.google.com with SMTP id 1so156759744wmz.1; Mon, 05 Sep 2016 13:45:05 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=20120113; h=from:to:cc:subject:date:message-id:mime-version:thread-index :content-language; bh=K6OxFflyUixna0+qQVw7aXsgIP7qMZ8Bu+hNkUdKoK4=; b=MjLCZUxSHorREhb/3FfASbb8fslmD5UU1datjaDJgRp08BeQiu4HPNyowaGmW/+I4O wATPWyW35cdAn79PpC58kWPpmGX2WHQItN8npotEPokuRflkYY33Sm76eWwL6JPXmwnA EgTcN4hgAQHL3e7JG1ZYN7vrHCTZUhJIhJ+eXbZmXlOkjdWMIjbaq5ygUQLZREla8veT cY5Y6SDB4JDSpbbrhL+8sv43uz72bqi8CCClNmiAOQS+WoS6wgBND3W2DXKXAAtzKDxf 5677yN9qBo9I/qrH9CTXvvc+GZojMJUxFmgAGgPUQe36LTy5aoHlOdpdF7jgFBh5tuxk LLSA== X-Google-DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=1e100.net; s=20130820; h=x-gm-message-state:from:to:cc:subject:date:message-id:mime-version :thread-index:content-language; bh=K6OxFflyUixna0+qQVw7aXsgIP7qMZ8Bu+hNkUdKoK4=; b=Yu1XI6Yx5Qcu2DYp758ZzfGsYNler5J20wOka/h3OvA7shXHQngZJ0eW9w41ANbYbh u/1WAnuccI/QhDXNhntJGCzrmgf96y6waP4njhn1ZXpz3kkI5x3Fz2Ja8e7BokI2YAvp msvjheuj63b5c/cexeyAgngvLX3MTfBn4BuxBN79l7O3oAwEtLV8HFXdWZWeu1W2lg6D AUgzMD0D9tYYkOhBLln45tR1kOvJXLhX0mw1L2ivef31vXpbAkO/vZb+hz8OML5Z2XZ0 EpusleLkgmI1OLpVuzsDCyw5PbKSo8762uajiStSGXcH/8x2vBeKq9OT4Vjxr4pPTjuW C6EA== X-Gm-Message-State: AE9vXwOSVYTxfHEXYoyMvCCmFmowLCjp5XbinNnuM97Trmy8zgYqnKNdwWBUwgYlg7L02w== X-Received: by 10.28.56.195 with SMTP id f186mr16276403wma.59.1473108303476; Mon, 05 Sep 2016 13:45:03 -0700 (PDT) Received: from RoniPC (bzq-79-178-255-20.red.bezeqint.net. [79.178.255.20]) by smtp.gmail.com with ESMTPSA id z17sm22641190wmz.23.2016.09.05.13.45.01 (version=TLS1 cipher=ECDHE-RSA-AES128-SHA bits=128/128); Mon, 05 Sep 2016 13:45:02 -0700 (PDT) From: "Roni Even" To: Subject: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-pals-mc-pon-04 Date: Mon, 5 Sep 2016 23:44:07 +0300 Message-ID: <026501d207b6$3ff04940$bfd0dbc0$@gmail.com> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="----=_NextPart_000_0266_01D207CF.653F07E0" X-Mailer: Microsoft Outlook 14.0 Thread-Index: AdIHtjYkIjSvNaAdQuSQjH4iEiErgA== Content-Language: he Archived-At: Cc: gen-art@ietf.org, ietf@ietf.org X-BeenThere: ietf@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.17 Precedence: list List-Id: IETF-Discussion List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 05 Sep 2016 20:45:12 -0000 This is a multipart message in MIME format. ------=_NextPart_000_0266_01D207CF.653F07E0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="us-ascii" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at . Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-pals-mc-pon-04 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2016-9-5 IETF LC End Date: 2016-9-7 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a standard track RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: ------=_NextPart_000_0266_01D207CF.653F07E0 Content-Type: text/html; charset="us-ascii" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable

I am the assigned Gen-ART = reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ = at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq= >.

Please resolve these = comments along with any other Last Call comments you may = receive.

Document:  draft-ietf-pals-mc-pon-04

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date:2016–9-5

IETF LC End Date: 2016–9-7

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Summary: = This draft is ready for publication as a standard track RFC.

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