TSV-ART review for draft-ietf-xrblock-independent-burst-gap-discard-02
Brian Trammell <trammell@tik.ee.ethz.ch> Wed, 03 August 2016 09:46 UTC
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Subject: TSV-ART review for draft-ietf-xrblock-independent-burst-gap-discard-02
Date: Wed, 03 Aug 2016 11:46:14 +0200
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Greetings, I've reviewed draft-ietf-xrblock-independent-burst-gap-discard-02 for the Transport Area Review Team (TSV-ART); please treat these as IETF Last Call comments. Summary: This draft is relatively straightforward, and is ready for publication, modulo an editorial nit, below: Nit(s): (1) Terminology, Bursts and Gaps: I can guess what Gmin is without having to read RFC3611 section 4.7.2 (and, indeed, I was mostly right), but it would be nice to copy at least an abbreviated definition here. Cheers, Brian
- TSV-ART review for draft-ietf-xrblock-independent… Brian Trammell