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Re: Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-v6ops-conditional-ras-04

Jen Linkova <furry13@gmail.com> Tue, 22 May 2018 14:08 UTC

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From: Jen Linkova <furry13@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 23 May 2018 00:08:01 +1000
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Subject: Re: Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-v6ops-conditional-ras-04
To: Sheng Jiang <jiangsheng@huawei.com>
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Hi Sheng,

On Mon, May 21, 2018 at 6:23 PM, Sheng Jiang <jiangsheng@huawei.com> wrote:
> Minor issue: There are many unused reference. However, they are not simple Nits
> and cannot be fixed by deleting them from reference list. Many of these unused
> reference are really relevant and should have some content to describe the
> relationship with the mechanism or scenario of the document, such as RFC6296
> NAT66, etc.

Thanks a lot for your review. I'll update the draft to address this
issue - the new version will be posted later on this week.


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SY, Jen Linkova aka Furry

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