Review of draft-ietf-clue-rtp-mapping-10

Vijay Gurbani <vijay.gurbani@alcatel-lucent.com> Fri, 23 December 2016 15:12 UTC

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Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-clue-rtp-mapping-??
Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani
Review Date: 2016-12-23
IETF LC End Date: 2017-01-12
IESG Telechat date: 2017-01-19

Summary: Ready with nits.

Major issues: 0

Minor issues: 0

Nits/editorial comments: 
- S1: s/source of Media, such as from one or more Capture
Devices./source of Media from one or more Capture Devices./
- S1: s/SIP offer answer/SIP Offer/Answer model/
- S1: s/recommendations, for the CLUE architecture, about
how/recommendations for the CLUE architecture on how/
- S4: s/have main and slides video sources can/have a primary video
source and a slide video source can/
- S5: s/CaptureIDis/CaptureID is/