Re: [mpls] Review of draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time-12
Stewart Bryant <stewart.bryant@gmail.com> Mon, 23 January 2017 09:30 UTC
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Subject: Re: [mpls] Review of draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time-12
To: "Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)" <ginsberg@cisco.com>, John E Drake <jdrake@juniper.net>, "Acee Lindem (acee)" <acee@cisco.com>, Alexander Vainshtein <Alexander.Vainshtein@ecitele.com>, Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com>
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From: Stewart Bryant <stewart.bryant@gmail.com>
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Les This is very much path related and thus it is entirely reasonable to carry it in the IGP. If you want a path that gives you the highest quality time transfer, then you need to select a path on which every hop provides the information needed to minimise the uncertainly in the transit delay time. Thus I can see paths being chosen on the basis that every hop performs this service. That is obviously a routing decision and thus it is reasonable to advertise the information needed to make that decision in the routing protocol. - Stewart On 19/01/2017 21:08, Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) wrote: > > John – > > The text you have excerpted below was trying to say two things: > > 1)If you want to advertise this in the IGPs the OSPF style proposal is > much better from an implementation standpoint than the IS-IS GENAPP > proposal > > 2)There is a larger question as to whether we should be using the IGPs > for this at all > > Statement #1 should not be interpreted to imply that I am advocating > using the IGPs. J > > That said, we “ALWAYS” end up choosing using the IGPs to do this sort > of thing – not because it is the “RIGHT” thing to do architecturally – > but because it is so convenient. > > I am just asking for folks to pause and think about this a bit more > from an architectural perspective. > > Les > > *From:*John E Drake [mailto:jdrake@juniper.net] > *Sent:* Thursday, January 19, 2017 12:20 PM > *To:* Les Ginsberg (ginsberg); Acee Lindem (acee); Alexander > Vainshtein; Greg Mirsky > *Cc:* Robert Sparks; mpls@ietf.org; gen-art@ietf.org; > draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time.all@ietf.org; ietf@ietf.org; > isis-chairs@ietf.org; Abhay Roy (akr) > *Subject:* RE: [mpls] Review of draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time-12 > > Les, > > Comments inline. > > Yours Irrespectively, > > John > > *From:*Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) [mailto:ginsberg@cisco.com] > *Sent:* Thursday, January 19, 2017 12:25 PM > *To:* John E Drake <jdrake@juniper.net <mailto:jdrake@juniper.net>>; > Acee Lindem (acee) <acee@cisco.com <mailto:acee@cisco.com>>; Alexander > Vainshtein <Alexander.Vainshtein@ecitele.com > <mailto:Alexander.Vainshtein@ecitele.com>>; Greg Mirsky > <gregimirsky@gmail.com <mailto:gregimirsky@gmail.com>> > *Cc:* Robert Sparks <rjsparks@nostrum.com > <mailto:rjsparks@nostrum.com>>; mpls@ietf.org <mailto:mpls@ietf.org>; > gen-art@ietf.org <mailto:gen-art@ietf.org>; > draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time.all@ietf.org > <mailto:draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time.all@ietf.org>; ietf@ietf.org > <mailto:ietf@ietf.org>; isis-chairs@ietf.org > <mailto:isis-chairs@ietf.org>; Abhay Roy (akr) <akr@cisco.com > <mailto:akr@cisco.com>> > *Subject:* RE: [mpls] Review of draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time-12 > > John – > > For me, this raises the age-old question of when it is/is not > appropriate to use IGPs for flooding information. > > This is clearly not TE information – you just happen to be using this > in conjunction with MPLS – but it is a generic capability. I do not > see the IGPs as the appropriate mechanism to flood generic interface > capabilities. It also, as Acee has pointed out, results in flooding > information to all nodes in the domain when only a few care about it. > > *//* > > */[JD] RTM support as defined in the draft would be used to provide > extremely accurate time synchronization in an MPLS network so I would > suggest that all nodes in such a network would be using it and hence > that it does belong in the IGP. As an aside, advertising it in the > IGP facilitates incremental or partial deployment. Your yesterday’s > email supports this: /* > > *//* > > */“It would seem more appropriate to treat RTM information either as:/* > > *//* > > */o an extension to link attribute information already advertised by > the IGPs (as has been suggested for OSPF) - which would suggest in > IS-IS a sub-TLV of TLV 22(et al)/* > > *//* > > */or/* > > *//* > > ·*/As an interface attribute independent of routing protocols which > could be retrieved utilizing network management tools”/* > > Les > > *From:*John E Drake [mailto:jdrake@juniper.net] > *Sent:* Thursday, January 19, 2017 8:54 AM > *To:* Acee Lindem (acee); Alexander Vainshtein; Greg Mirsky; Les > Ginsberg (ginsberg) > *Cc:* Robert Sparks; mpls@ietf.org <mailto:mpls@ietf.org>; > gen-art@ietf.org <mailto:gen-art@ietf.org>; > draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time.all@ietf.org > <mailto:draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time.all@ietf.org>; ietf@ietf.org > <mailto:ietf@ietf.org>; isis-chairs@ietf.org > <mailto:isis-chairs@ietf.org>; Abhay Roy (akr) > *Subject:* RE: [mpls] Review of draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time-12 > > Acee, > > Relying on an omniscient controller is a non-starter in general and in > particular because the protocol by which it would learn each node’s > RTM capabilities and distribute them to the other nodes is undefined. > Further, one of the ways by which an omniscient controller learns a > node’s capabilities is by snooping the link/state database. > > Yours Irrespectively, > > John > > *From:*Acee Lindem (acee) [mailto:acee@cisco.com] > *Sent:* Thursday, January 19, 2017 11:47 AM > *To:* John E Drake <jdrake@juniper.net <mailto:jdrake@juniper.net>>; > Alexander Vainshtein <Alexander.Vainshtein@ecitele.com > <mailto:Alexander.Vainshtein@ecitele.com>>; Greg Mirsky > <gregimirsky@gmail.com <mailto:gregimirsky@gmail.com>>; Les Ginsberg > (ginsberg) <ginsberg@cisco.com <mailto:ginsberg@cisco.com>> > *Cc:* Robert Sparks <rjsparks@nostrum.com > <mailto:rjsparks@nostrum.com>>; mpls@ietf.org <mailto:mpls@ietf.org>; > gen-art@ietf.org <mailto:gen-art@ietf.org>; > draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time.all@ietf.org > <mailto:draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time.all@ietf.org>; ietf@ietf.org > <mailto:ietf@ietf.org>; isis-chairs@ietf.org > <mailto:isis-chairs@ietf.org>; Abhay Roy (akr) <akr@cisco.com > <mailto:akr@cisco.com>> > *Subject:* Re: [mpls] Review of draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time-12 > > Hi John, > > *From: *John E Drake <jdrake@juniper.net <mailto:jdrake@juniper.net>> > *Date: *Thursday, January 19, 2017 at 10:43 AM > *To: *Acee Lindem <acee@cisco.com <mailto:acee@cisco.com>>, Alexander > Vainshtein <Alexander.Vainshtein@ecitele.com > <mailto:Alexander.Vainshtein@ecitele.com>>, Greg Mirsky > <gregimirsky@gmail.com <mailto:gregimirsky@gmail.com>>, "Les Ginsberg > (ginsberg)" <ginsberg@cisco.com <mailto:ginsberg@cisco.com>> > *Cc: *Robert Sparks <rjsparks@nostrum.com > <mailto:rjsparks@nostrum.com>>, "mpls@ietf.org <mailto:mpls@ietf.org>" > <mpls@ietf.org <mailto:mpls@ietf.org>>, "gen-art@ietf.org > <mailto:gen-art@ietf.org>" <gen-art@ietf.org > <mailto:gen-art@ietf.org>>, > "draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time.all@ietf.org > <mailto:draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time.all@ietf.org>" > <draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time.all@ietf.org > <mailto:draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time.all@ietf.org>>, "ietf@ietf.org > <mailto:ietf@ietf.org>" <ietf@ietf.org <mailto:ietf@ietf.org>>, > "isis-chairs@ietf.org <mailto:isis-chairs@ietf.org>" > <isis-chairs@ietf.org <mailto:isis-chairs@ietf.org>>, "Abhay Roy > (akr)" <akr@cisco.com <mailto:akr@cisco.com>> > *Subject: *RE: [mpls] Review of draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time-12 > > Acee, > > We discussed all of this with you over a year ago and used your > guidance in adding the indication of RTM capability to OSPF. > > I’m sorry but I focused mainly on the OSPF protocol aspects then and > didn’t question the use case. This question came up in the IS-IS WG > discussions. > > Thanks, > > Acee > > Yours Irrespectively, > > John > > *From:*Acee Lindem (acee) [mailto:acee@cisco.com] > *Sent:* Thursday, January 19, 2017 11:38 AM > *To:* Alexander Vainshtein <Alexander.Vainshtein@ecitele.com > <mailto:Alexander.Vainshtein@ecitele.com>>; Greg Mirsky > <gregimirsky@gmail.com <mailto:gregimirsky@gmail.com>>; Les > Ginsberg (ginsberg) <ginsberg@cisco.com <mailto:ginsberg@cisco.com>> > *Cc:* Robert Sparks <rjsparks@nostrum.com > <mailto:rjsparks@nostrum.com>>; mpls@ietf.org > <mailto:mpls@ietf.org>; gen-art@ietf.org > <mailto:gen-art@ietf.org>; > draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time.all@ietf.org > <mailto:draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time.all@ietf.org>; > ietf@ietf.org <mailto:ietf@ietf.org>; isis-chairs@ietf.org > <mailto:isis-chairs@ietf.org>; Abhay Roy (akr) <akr@cisco.com > <mailto:akr@cisco.com>> > *Subject:* Re: [mpls] Review of draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time-12 > > I guess what we were trying to envision the use case and whether > it makes sense for all the nodes in the IGP routing domain to have > this information. Would the LSP ingress LSR only need to if the > egress LSR supports RTM and it is best effort recording for > transit LSRs in the path? > > Additionally, if it is needed in the IGPs, should there also be a > BGP-LS Link Attribute TLV proposed? > > Thanks, > > Acee > > *From: *Alexander Vainshtein <Alexander.Vainshtein@ecitele.com > <mailto:Alexander.Vainshtein@ecitele.com>> > *Date: *Thursday, January 19, 2017 at 10:15 AM > *To: *Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com > <mailto:gregimirsky@gmail.com>>, "Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)" > <ginsberg@cisco.com <mailto:ginsberg@cisco.com>> > *Cc: *Acee Lindem <acee@cisco.com <mailto:acee@cisco.com>>, Robert > Sparks <rjsparks@nostrum.com <mailto:rjsparks@nostrum.com>>, > "mpls@ietf.org <mailto:mpls@ietf.org>" <mpls@ietf.org > <mailto:mpls@ietf.org>>, "gen-art@ietf.org > <mailto:gen-art@ietf.org>" <gen-art@ietf.org > <mailto:gen-art@ietf.org>>, > "draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time.all@ietf.org > <mailto:draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time.all@ietf.org>" > <draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time.all@ietf.org > <mailto:draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time.all@ietf.org>>, > "ietf@ietf.org <mailto:ietf@ietf.org>" <ietf@ietf.org > <mailto:ietf@ietf.org>>, "isis-chairs@ietf.org > <mailto:isis-chairs@ietf.org>" <isis-chairs@ietf.org > <mailto:isis-chairs@ietf.org>>, "Abhay Roy (akr)" <akr@cisco.com > <mailto:akr@cisco.com>> > *Subject: *RE: [mpls] Review of draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time-12 > > Hi all, > > I concur with Greg: from my POV an interoperable solution > should not depend on an omniscient NMS client distributing > information about capabilities of each node to each other node. > > Regards, > > Sasha > > Office: +972-39266302 > > Cell: +972-549266302 > > Email: Alexander.Vainshtein@ecitele.com > <mailto:Alexander.Vainshtein@ecitele.com> > > *From:*Greg Mirsky [mailto:gregimirsky@gmail.com] > *Sent:* Thursday, January 19, 2017 6:01 PM > *To:* Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) <ginsberg@cisco.com > <mailto:ginsberg@cisco.com>> > *Cc:* Acee Lindem (acee) <acee@cisco.com > <mailto:acee@cisco.com>>; Robert Sparks <rjsparks@nostrum.com > <mailto:rjsparks@nostrum.com>>; mpls@ietf.org > <mailto:mpls@ietf.org>; gen-art@ietf.org > <mailto:gen-art@ietf.org>; > draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time.all@ietf.org > <mailto:draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time.all@ietf.org>; > ietf@ietf.org <mailto:ietf@ietf.org>; isis-chairs@ietf.org > <mailto:isis-chairs@ietf.org>; Abhay Roy (akr) <akr@cisco.com > <mailto:akr@cisco.com>> > *Subject:* Re: [mpls] Review of draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time-12 > > Hi Les, > > I believe that IGP extensions to advertise RTM capability are > required. > > Regards, > > Greg > > On Thu, Jan 19, 2017 at 7:57 AM, Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) > <ginsberg@cisco.com <mailto:ginsberg@cisco.com>> wrote: > > Greg – > > I am having trouble understanding your response. > > The question we are raising is whether we should extend > the IGPs to support advertising RTM capability – an > alternative being to retrieve the capability via network > management. > > Saying that the IGP functionality is optional and/or > wouldn’t always be advertised doesn’t really answer the > question of whether we should or should not define the IGP > extensions. > > Could you respond more directly to this point? > > Les > > *From:*Greg Mirsky [mailto:gregimirsky@gmail.com > <mailto:gregimirsky@gmail.com>] > *Sent:* Thursday, January 19, 2017 7:44 AM > *To:* Acee Lindem (acee) > *Cc:* Robert Sparks; mpls@ietf.org <mailto:mpls@ietf.org>; > gen-art@ietf.org <mailto:gen-art@ietf.org>; > draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time.all@ietf.org > <mailto:draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time.all@ietf.org>; > ietf@ietf.org <mailto:ietf@ietf.org>; Les Ginsberg > (ginsberg); isis-chairs@ietf.org > <mailto:isis-chairs@ietf.org>; Abhay Roy (akr) > > > *Subject:* Re: [mpls] Review of > draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time-12 > > Hi Acee, > > the draft defines optional functionality. If an operator > has no use neither for PTP's Transparent Clock, nor RTM > itself as performance metric, then RTM sub-TLV would not > be included and thus it would not be flooded. Of course, > it be right to reflect RTM capability through YANG data > model, thus allowing SDN scenario you've described. > > Regards, > > Greg > > On Wed, Jan 18, 2017 at 2:51 PM, Acee Lindem (acee) > <acee@cisco.com <mailto:acee@cisco.com>> wrote: > > Hi Greg, > > Although it is a bit late, we’ve had some discussions > amongst the IS-IS and OSPF chairs and are wondering > whether the interface capability belongs in the IGPs. This > will be flooded throughout the entire routing domain – is > it really needed on every node or will it the RTM testing > be initiated from an omniscient NMS client that would know > the capabilities of each node or easily query them using > YANG? > > Thanks, > > Acee > > *From: *mpls <mpls-bounces@ietf.org > <mailto:mpls-bounces@ietf.org>> on behalf of Greg Mirsky > <gregimirsky@gmail.com <mailto:gregimirsky@gmail.com>> > *Date: *Wednesday, January 18, 2017 at 1:25 PM > *To: *Robert Sparks <rjsparks@nostrum.com > <mailto:rjsparks@nostrum.com>> > *Cc: *"mpls@ietf.org <mailto:mpls@ietf.org>" > <mpls@ietf.org <mailto:mpls@ietf.org>>, "gen-art@ietf.org > <mailto:gen-art@ietf.org>" <gen-art@ietf.org > <mailto:gen-art@ietf.org>>, > "draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time.all@ietf.org > <mailto:draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time.all@ietf.org>" > <draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time.all@ietf.org > <mailto:draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time.all@ietf.org>>, > "ietf@ietf.org <mailto:ietf@ietf.org>" <ietf@ietf.org > <mailto:ietf@ietf.org>> > *Subject: *Re: [mpls] Review of > draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time-12 > > Hi Robert, > > thank you for the most expedient review and comments. > I'll make changes in Section 2 per your suggestion. > > Regards, > > Greg > > On Wed, Jan 18, 2017 at 10:34 AM, Robert Sparks > <rjsparks@nostrum.com <mailto:rjsparks@nostrum.com>> > wrote: > > The changes all look good. > > I still think you should say something in the document > about what "the time of packet arrival" and > "transmission" means, and call out the point you made > about being careful to not introduce apparent jitter > by not making those measurements consistently. (The > definitions you point to in your earlier mail from > G.8013 don't really help - they just say "time of > packet arrival". Again, the first and last bit are > likely to be several nanoseconds apart so I think it > matters. Perhaps you're saying it doesn't matter as > long as each node is consistent (there will be error > in the residence time measurement, but it will be > constant at each node, so the sum of errors will be > constant, and the clocks will be ok?) > > Please look at the new first paragraph of section 2 - > there's a mix of "as case" and "in case" that should > be made consistent. I suspect it would be easiest to > simply say "referred to as using a one-step clock" and > "referred to as using a two-step clock" or similar. > > RjS > > On 1/18/17 12:03 PM, Greg Mirsky wrote: > > Hi Robert, > > Sasha Vainshtein came with elegant idea to address > disconnection between discussion of one-step and > two-step modes that you've pointed out. We've > moved Section 7 as sub-section into Section 2 now. > Attached are updated diff and the proposed new > version -13. > > Regards, > > Greg > > On Wed, Jan 18, 2017 at 8:13 AM, Greg Mirsky > <gregimirsky@gmail.com > <mailto:gregimirsky@gmail.com>> wrote: > > Hi Robert, > > once again, thank you for your thorough review and > the most detailed comments. I've prepared updated > version and would greatly appreciate if you review > the changes and let us know whether your comments > been addressed. Attached are diff and the new version. > > Regards, > > Greg > > On Wed, Jan 11, 2017 at 7:48 AM, Robert Sparks > <rjsparks@nostrum.com > <mailto:rjsparks@nostrum.com>> wrote: > > Reviewer: Robert Sparks > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this > draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF > documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat > these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time-12 > Reviewer: Robert Sparks > Review Date: 2017-01-10 > IETF LC End Date: 2017-01-17 > IESG Telechat date: 2017-02-02 > > Summary: Ready (with nits) for publication as > a Proposed Standard > > I have two primary comments. I expect both are > rooted in the authors > and working group knowing what the document > means instead of seeing > what > it says or doesn't say: > > 1) The document is loose with its use of > 'packet', and where TTLs > appear when > they are discussed. It might be helpful to > rephrase the text that > speaks > of RTM packets in terms of RTM messages that > are encoded as G-ACh > messages and > not refer to packets unless you mean the whole > encapsulated packet > with MPLS > header, ACH, and G-ACh message. > > 2) Since this new mechanic speaks in terms of > fractional nanoseconds, > some > discussion of what trigger-point you intend > people to use for taking > the > precise time of a packet's arrival or > departure seems warranted. (The > first and > last bit of the whole encapsulated packet > above are going to appear at > the > physical layer many nanoseconds apart at OC192 > speeds if I've done the > math > right). It may be obvious to the folks > discussing this, but it's not > obvious > from the document. If it's _not_ obvious and > variation in technique > is > expected, then some discussion about issues > that might arise from > different > implementation choices would be welcome. > > The rest of these are editorial nits: > > It would help to pull an overview description > of the difference > between > one-step and two-step much earlier in the > document. I suggest in the > overview > in section 2. Otherwise, the reader really has > to jump forward and > read section > 7 before section 3's 5th bullet makes any sense. > > In section 3, "IANA will be asked" should be > made active. Say "This > document > asks IANA to" and point to the IANA > consideration section. Apply > similar > treatment to the other places where you talk > about future IANA > actions. > > There are several places where there are > missing words (typically > articles or > prepositions). You're less likely to end up > with misinterpretations > during the > RFC Editor phase if you provide them before > the document gets that far > in the > process. The spots I found most disruptive > were these (this is not > intended to > be exhaustive): > > Section 3: "set 1 according" -> "set to 1 > according" > Section 3: "the Table 19 [IEEE..." -> "Table > 19 of [IEEE..." > Section 4.2: "Detailed discussion of ... > modes in Section 7." > -> "Detailed discussion of ... modes appears > in Section 7." > Section 10: "most of" -> "most of all" > > In Setion 3.1 at "identity of the source > port", please point into the > document > that defines this identity and its > representation. I suspect this is a > pointer > into a specific section in IEEE.1588.2008]. >
- Review of draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time-12 Robert Sparks
- Re: Review of draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time-12 Greg Mirsky
- Re: Review of draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time-12 Greg Mirsky
- Re: Review of draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time-12 Juergen Schoenwaelder
- Re: Review of draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time-12 Greg Mirsky
- Re: Review of draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time-12 Greg Mirsky
- Re: Review of draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time-12 Greg Mirsky
- Re: Review of draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time-12 Greg Mirsky
- Re: Review of draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time-12 Robert Sparks
- Re: Review of draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time-12 Stewart Bryant
- Re: Review of draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time-12 Greg Mirsky
- Re: [mpls] Review of draft-ietf-mpls-residence-ti… Acee Lindem (acee)
- Re: [mpls] Review of draft-ietf-mpls-residence-ti… Greg Mirsky
- RE: [mpls] Review of draft-ietf-mpls-residence-ti… Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)
- Re: [mpls] Review of draft-ietf-mpls-residence-ti… Greg Mirsky
- RE: [mpls] Review of draft-ietf-mpls-residence-ti… Adrian Farrel
- RE: [mpls] Review of draft-ietf-mpls-residence-ti… Alexander Vainshtein
- RE: [mpls] Review of draft-ietf-mpls-residence-ti… Mach Chen
- Re: [mpls] Review of draft-ietf-mpls-residence-ti… Stewart Bryant
- Re: [mpls] Review of draft-ietf-mpls-residence-ti… Stewart Bryant
- Re: [mpls] Review of draft-ietf-mpls-residence-ti… Stewart Bryant