Re: [Insipid] draft-ietf-insipid-session-id-20: comments

"Paul Giralt (pgiralt)" <pgiralt@cisco.com> Tue, 26 April 2016 21:22 UTC

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From: "Paul Giralt (pgiralt)" <pgiralt@cisco.com>
To: Brett Tate <brett@broadsoft.com>
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Subject: Re: [Insipid] draft-ietf-insipid-session-id-20: comments
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Thanks Brett. Inline…

> 
> 1) Section 7 paragraph 3: You might want to include section 8 as part of
> the last sentence's exception since section 8 has the mandate to fix the
> remote value.
> 

Added.


> 2) Section 8 bullet 3: Last sentence contains "value value”.

fixed

> 

> 3) Section 8 bullet 5: Last sentence contains "value value”.

fixed

> 4) Section 10.3 figure 3: Concerning last re-invite, should likely show
> the B2BUA correcting the remote-uuid to be C and mention it within last
> bullet.  This would comply with a MUST contained within section 8 last
> paragraph.
> 


Yes, you’re right. I’ve fixed and added some additional wording in the bullet to explain this.


> 5) Section 10.3 last bullet: Concerning "local-uuid" = "A", it looks like
> "A" should be replaced with "C".  However, I might be incorrectly thinking
> there is an implied {} around the two comma-separated values similar to
> the explicit {} within prior bullets.

This looks like a typo. It should be “C” and fixed.