Re: [Insipid] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-insipid-logme-reqs

"Dawes, Peter, Vodafone Group" <Peter.Dawes@vodafone.com> Wed, 05 October 2016 08:10 UTC

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From: "Dawes, Peter, Vodafone Group" <Peter.Dawes@vodafone.com>
To: Paul Kyzivat <pkyzivat@alum.mit.edu>, "insipid@ietf.org" <insipid@ietf.org>
Thread-Topic: [Insipid] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-insipid-logme-reqs
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Date: Wed, 05 Oct 2016 08:09:41 +0000
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Subject: Re: [Insipid] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-insipid-logme-reqs
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Hi Paul,
Thanks for checking, we will fix that error.

Regards,
Peter

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Paul Kyzivat [mailto:pkyzivat@alum.mit.edu]
> Sent: 03 October 2016 19:25
> To: Dawes, Peter, Vodafone Group; insipid@ietf.org
> Cc: Gonzalo Salgueiro (gsalguei); ben@nostrum.com; Alberto Llamas
> (albertollamaso@gmail.com); brett@broadsoft.com; Arun Arunachalam
> (carunach); Paul Giralt (pgiralt)
> Subject: Re: [Insipid] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-insipid-logme-reqs
> 
> Peter,
> 
> On 10/3/16 10:09 AM, Dawes, Peter, Vodafone Group wrote:
> > Hello All,
> > Thanks to everyone who reviewed and commented on the logme
> requirements draft, we have uploaded revision -08
> (https://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-insipid-logme-reqs-08.txt) with the
> changes summarized below that aim to resolve the issues raised. Some of
> the changes are taken from e-mail exchanges here on the insipid list but
> some of the text (and structure) is new so it would be good to hear whether
> the revised draft is now OK.
> 
> Looks good. I found one thing you missed:
> 
> In REQ9: s/proxy/intermediary/
> 
> 	Thanks,
> 	Paul