Re: [Insipid] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-insipid-logme-reqs

Paul Kyzivat <pkyzivat@alum.mit.edu> Mon, 03 October 2016 18:25 UTC

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From: Paul Kyzivat <pkyzivat@alum.mit.edu>
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Subject: Re: [Insipid] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-insipid-logme-reqs
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Peter,

On 10/3/16 10:09 AM, Dawes, Peter, Vodafone Group wrote:
> Hello All,
> Thanks to everyone who reviewed and commented on the logme requirements draft, we have uploaded revision -08 (https://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-insipid-logme-reqs-08.txt) with the changes summarized below that aim to resolve the issues raised. Some of the changes are taken from e-mail exchanges here on the insipid list but some of the text (and structure) is new so it would be good to hear whether the revised draft is now OK.

Looks good. I found one thing you missed:

In REQ9: s/proxy/intermediary/

	Thanks,
	Paul