Re: [Insipid] Warren Kumari's No Objection on draft-ietf-insipid-logme-marking-12: (with COMMENT)

"Arun Arunachalam (carunach)" <carunach@cisco.com> Thu, 16 August 2018 14:45 UTC

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From: "Arun Arunachalam (carunach)" <carunach@cisco.com>
To: Warren Kumari <warren@kumari.net>
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Thread-Topic: Warren Kumari's No Objection on draft-ietf-insipid-logme-marking-12: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: Re: [Insipid] Warren Kumari's No Objection on draft-ietf-insipid-logme-marking-12: (with COMMENT)
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Thanks Warren!

Please see inline.

> On Aug 14, 2018, at 1:56 PM, Warren Kumari <warren@kumari.net>; wrote:
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> Warren Kumari has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-insipid-logme-marking-12: No Objection
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> Thank  you for a clear and well written document.
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> A rich version of this review is at:
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> Thank you for a clear and well-written document.
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> Line: 124
> I'm uncomfortable with the "operators need to" wording -- perhaps "operators
> often have to", or "operators are often expected to”?

Sure. We will make this change.

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> Line: 1555
> The privacy implications of all of this seem large -- I think that it would be
> really useful to make "Privacy" be its own section, and not a subsection of
> Security Considerations.
> 

We plan to make the content under "8.4 Privacy” as a separate section named “Section 9.0 Privacy Considerations”. 

Thanks!
Peter & Arun

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