Re: [Int-area] [nvo3] Comments on draft-ietf-nvo3-gue-05

Chema Gonzalez <chema@berkeley.edu> Wed, 15 March 2017 02:01 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Int-area] [nvo3] Comments on draft-ietf-nvo3-gue-05
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2 minor comments:

1. There is a small typo. Where it says:

B.1. Priveleged ports

It should say:

B.1. Privileged ports

2. Not sure whether this is right or not: Sections 3.3.2 and 5.4.1
suggest the use of 94 as the next proto header value ("(proto =
94,IPIP)"). Both linux/include/uapi/linux/in.h and
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_IP_protocol_numbers suggest the
right ipip value is 4. The wiki link suggests 94 was used by "KA9Q NOS
compatible IP over IP tunneling", while the linux kernel points at
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-nikander-esp-beet-mode-05.

Thanks,
-Chema