Re: [Int-area] Document shepherd comments on 'draft-ietf-intarea-gue-05'

Tom Herbert <tom@herbertland.com> Tue, 28 August 2018 15:48 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Int-area] Document shepherd comments on 'draft-ietf-intarea-gue-05'
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On Tue, Aug 28, 2018 at 8:24 AM, Joe Touch <touch@strayalpha.com> wrote:
> Some comments below, hopefully constructive/additive...
>
> Joe
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> On 2018-08-24 12:34, Templin (US), Fred L wrote:
>
> Hello,
>
> As document shepherd, I am required to perform a review. Please see below
> for initial comments, and respond on the list.
>
> Fred
>
> ---
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> ...
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> Section by Section comments:
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> ...
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> Section 5.4.1:
> Second paragraph, "set 94 for IPIP", I was under the impression that the
> common
> values for IPIP encapsulation are '4' for IPv4 and '41' for IPv6. I have not
> seen '94'
> appear elsewhere. Is this a common use? If not, would it be better to use
> '4' or '41'?
>
>
> 94 is defined here:
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>    [IDM91a] Ioannidis, J., Duchamp, D., Maguire, G., "IP-based
>             protocols for mobile internetworking", Proceedings of
>             SIGCOMM '91, ACM, September 1991.
>
> See RFC 1853 for a list of other "non-4" and "non-6" IP tunnels, but these
> are not IP-in-IP -- that should cite RFC2003 (though, as noted in
> draft-ietf-tunnels, there are some issues with the details in that RFC).

I think it's probably better to use 4 and show the example as IPv4/IP
encapsulation since that's probably more common.

Thanks,
Tom

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