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[Int-dir] Re: [Last-Call] Intdir telechat review of draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-iot-dns-considerations-13

Michael Richardson <mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca> Thu, 16 May 2024 20:42 UTC

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Pascal Thubert via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
    > use of ! : please review if all "!" in the document are really
    > intended.

I have two.  Do you think it's too many?

    > Abstract

>    Alos, this document << typo

thank for the typo list.  I will post as -15 on Friday.

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