Re: [Int-dir] Int-Dir Review of draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-multicast-12
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Cc: "draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-multicast@tools.ietf.org" <draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-multicast@tools.ietf.org>, Zhen Cao <zhencao.ietf@gmail.com>, "int-ads@ietf.org" <int-ads@ietf.org>, "int-dir@ietf.org" <int-dir@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: [Int-dir] Int-Dir Review of draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-multicast-12
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Hi, I'm the other reviewer - I should have my review with you soon. Best wishes, Tim > On 12 Dec 2016, at 07:57, mohamed.boucadair@orange.com wrote: > > Re-, > > Ok, thank you. > > I will wait for the second IntDir review before submitting an updated version with the change we agreed. > > Cheers, > Med > >> -----Message d'origine----- >> De : Zhen Cao [mailto:zhencao.ietf@gmail.com] >> Envoyé : lundi 12 décembre 2016 08:16 >> À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed IMT/OLN >> Cc : draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-multicast@tools.ietf.org; int- >> ads@ietf.org; int-dir@ietf.org >> Objet : Re: Int-Dir Review of draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-multicast-12 >> >> Hello Med, >> >> Thanks for the quick response which sounds good to me. >> >> BR, >> Zhen >> >> >> >> On Mon, Dec 12, 2016 at 2:45 PM, <mohamed.boucadair@orange.com> wrote: >>> Dear Zhen, >>> >>> Thank you for the review. >>> >>> Please see inline. >>> >>> Cheers, >>> Med >>> >>>> -----Message d'origine----- >>>> De : Zhen Cao [mailto:zhencao.ietf@gmail.com] >>>> Envoyé : lundi 12 décembre 2016 07:01 >>>> À : draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-multicast@tools.ietf.org >>>> Cc : int-ads@ietf.org; int-dir@ietf.org >>>> Objet : Int-Dir Review of draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-multicast-12 >>>> >>>> Hi, authors and editors, >>>> >>>> I am an assigned INT directorate reviewer for this draft. These >>>> comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Internet Area >>>> Directors. Document editors and shepherds should treat these comments >>>> just like they would treat comments from any other IETF contributors >>>> and resolve them along with any other Last Call comments that have >>>> been received. For more details of the INT directorate, see >>>> <http://www.ietf.org/iesg/directorate.html>. >>>> >>>> >>>> I do not see any major reason to block the publication of this draft. >>>> Below are two comments for discussion. >>>> >>>> a) uPrefix64 and mPrefix64 >>>> >>>> I was a bit confused when I encounter the name suffix -64, because >>>> they somehow imply only 64-bit long prefix could be used, while the >>>> fact may be not true. >>> >>> [Med] Actually, 64 is not used to denote the prefix length but this is a >> practice widely used in transition mechanisms, you can see for instance: >>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc6146 >>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc6147 >>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc7050 >>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc7225 >>> ... >>> >>> If '64' means an IPv6-IPv4 mapping, it may make >>>> some sense. So I highly encourage the editors to put some notes below >>>> the items in the terminology section. >>>> >>> >>> [Med] Makes sense. I added a note similar note that we have in >> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-softwire-multicast-prefix-option- >> 11: >>> >>> Note: "64" is used as an abbreviation for IPv6-IPv4 >>> interconnection. >>> >>>> >>>> b) >>>> 6.2. Multicast Data Forwarding >>>> >>>> When the mB4 receives an IPv6 multicast packet, it MUST check the >>>> group address and the source address. If the IPv6 multicast group >>>> prefix is mPrefix64 and the IPv6 source prefix is uPrefix64, the mB4 >>>> MUST decapsulate the IPv6 header and forward the IPv4 multicast >>>> packet through each relevant interface. Otherwise, the mB4 MUST >>>> silently drop the packet. >>>> >>>> comments: the mB4 not only needs to check the validity of mPrefix and >>>> uPrefix, but also needs to check if there exists an associated >>>> MLD/IGMP requests from that prefixes. Only if there was an IGMP >>>> report associted with this transaction, it will forward such multicast >>>> packets. >>>> >>>> >>> [Med] This is actually the intent of the last part of the text you >> quoted: >>> >>> prefix is mPrefix64 and the IPv6 source prefix is uPrefix64, the mB4 >>> MUST decapsulate the IPv6 header and forward the IPv4 multicast >>> packet through each relevant interface. >>> ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ >>> >>> If no state is found, there won't be any "relevant interface". So the >> traffic won't be forwarded. >>> >>>> Thanks for draft the document. >>>> >>>> -zhen > _______________________________________________ > Int-dir mailing list > Int-dir@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/int-dir
- [Int-dir] Int-Dir Review of draft-ietf-softwire-d… Zhen Cao
- Re: [Int-dir] Int-Dir Review of draft-ietf-softwi… mohamed.boucadair
- Re: [Int-dir] Int-Dir Review of draft-ietf-softwi… Zhen Cao
- Re: [Int-dir] Int-Dir Review of draft-ietf-softwi… mohamed.boucadair
- Re: [Int-dir] Int-Dir Review of draft-ietf-softwi… Tim Chown
- Re: [Int-dir] Int-Dir Review of draft-ietf-softwi… Lee, Yiu
- Re: [Int-dir] Int-Dir Review of draft-ietf-softwi… mohamed.boucadair
- Re: [Int-dir] Int-Dir Review of draft-ietf-softwi… Lee, Yiu