[Int-dir] Intdir early review of draft-ietf-6lo-nfc-10

Sheng Jiang <jiangsheng@huawei.com> Tue, 25 September 2018 06:06 UTC

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From: Sheng Jiang <jiangsheng@huawei.com>
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Date: Mon, 24 Sep 2018 23:06:26 -0700
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Subject: [Int-dir] Intdir early review of draft-ietf-6lo-nfc-10

Reviewer: Sheng Jiang
Review result: Ready with Nits

I am an assigned INT directorate reviewer for <draft-ietf-6lo-nfc-10.txt>.
These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Internet Area
Directors. Document editors and shepherd(s) should treat these comments just
like they would treat comments from any other IETF contributors and resolve
them along with any other Last Call comments that have been received. For more
details on the INT Directorate, see
https://datatracker.ietf.org/group/intdir/about/.

This draft looks good for me, with only a small Nit. However, I am not an IoT
expert, therefore, a review from IoTDir is necessary. I also recommend a review
from 6lowpan expert, particularly  Pascal Thubert, if it is practise.

'ECMA-340' is defined in reference section, but not quoted in the document.

Regards,

Sheng

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