[Int-dir] Intdir telechat review of draft-ietf-pim-3810bis-11

Sheng Jiang via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Sat, 03 August 2024 13:07 UTC

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Reviewer: Sheng Jiang
Review result: Ready with Nits

I have reviewed this document as part of the IntArea directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. Comments that
are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG
review. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like
any other last call comments.

Document: draft-ietf-pim-3810bis-11
Reviewer: Sheng Jiang
Review Date: 2024-08-03
Result: Ready

This Standards Track document updates RFC3810, "Multicast Listener Discovery
Version 2 (MLDv2) for IPv6". This document added a few clarification texts,
reformat tables and changed Reserved field in messages to Flags field, which
depends on draft-ietf-pim-3228bis. It is Ready for publication after addressed
comments of Last Call Reviews on -10 version.

A small Nit, in section 7.6.2, last paragraph, FE80::/64 shall be low case.

[Int-dir] Intdir telechat review of draft-ietf-pi… Sheng Jiang via Datatracker