Re: [Int-dir] Intdir last call review of draft-ietf-drip-rid-26

mohamed.boucadair@orange.com Mon, 16 May 2022 16:35 UTC

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Hi Pascal,

Many thanks for this detailed review. Much appreciated.

I trust Rob will reply to your various comments SOON. Please see one specific comment inline.  

Cheers,
Med

> -----Message d'origine-----
> De : Pascal Thubert via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org>
> Envoyé : lundi 16 mai 2022 15:30
> À : int-dir@ietf.org
> Cc : draft-ietf-drip-rid.all@ietf.org; last-call@ietf.org; tm-
> rid@ietf.org
> Objet : Intdir last call review of draft-ietf-drip-rid-26
> 
> Reviewer: Pascal Thubert
> Review result: Ready with Nits
> 
> 
[snip]
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> > 10.2.  Informative References
> 
>               unmanned-aerial-systems-serial-numbers>.
> 
> >  [drip-architecture]
> 
> Shouldn't be normative?

[Med] I understand the arch is a useful reading but, technically speaking, the arch I-D is not required to implement DETs.

> 
> >  [drip-authentication]
> 
> Same, and then for registries?
> 
> 

[Med] No normative language is used when calling out these two I-Ds. These are provided for illustration purposes, hence the use of "e.g." or "in practice". Thank you. 


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