[Iot-directorate] Iotdir telechat review of draft-ietf-capport-rfc7710bis-07

Suresh Krishnan via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Thu, 11 June 2020 13:45 UTC

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Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan
Review result: Ready

Overall I found the draft to be well written and easy to read but I one minor
comment.

* It is not clear how a constrained device (potentially without a user
interface) would handle the URI that it receives to escape the captive portal.
Has this been thought of? I think some new text in this regard would be useful
here, though one could make the case for this to be handled in the API draft
instead.