[Iot-directorate] Iotdir early review of draft-ietf-cbor-network-addresses-05
Mohit Sethi via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Mon, 26 July 2021 09:57 UTC
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Reviewer: Mohit Sethi Review result: Ready with Issues In the abstract, perhaps "describes" could be "specifies"/"defines"? It might make sense to provide references to the definition of tags 260 and 261. I had to look them up. "was removed in this specification" -> "is removed in this specification"? "When applied to an array that starts with a number"? Is 'number' the correct terminology? I confused it with the tag number? What would happen to tags 260 and 261. Are they now discouraged/forbidden? Are they meant to co-exist with 52 and 54?
- [Iot-directorate] Iotdir early review of draft-ie… Mohit Sethi via Datatracker
- Re: [Iot-directorate] Iotdir early review of draf… Carsten Bormann
- Re: [Iot-directorate] [Cbor] Iotdir early review … Barry Leiba
- Re: [Iot-directorate] [Cbor] Iotdir early review … Carsten Bormann
- Re: [Iot-directorate] [Cbor] Iotdir early review … Barry Leiba
- Re: [Iot-directorate] [Cbor] Iotdir early review … Carsten Bormann
- Re: [Iot-directorate] [Cbor] Iotdir early review … Rob Wilton (rwilton)
- Re: [Iot-directorate] [Cbor] Iotdir early review … Barry Leiba
- Re: [Iot-directorate] [Cbor] Iotdir early review … Carsten Bormann
- Re: [Iot-directorate] [Cbor] Iotdir early review … Christian Amsüss
- Re: [Iot-directorate] [Cbor] Iotdir early review … Michael Richardson