Re: [Iotops] Alissa Cooper's Block on charter-ietf-iotops-00-09: (with BLOCK and COMMENT)

"Rob Wilton (rwilton)" <rwilton@cisco.com> Thu, 21 January 2021 17:10 UTC

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From: "Rob Wilton (rwilton)" <rwilton@cisco.com>
To: Michael Richardson <mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca>, Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>
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Subject: Re: [Iotops] Alissa Cooper's Block on charter-ietf-iotops-00-09: (with BLOCK and COMMENT)
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Hi Alissa,

Warren and I have had a go at updating the text (multiple times due to it being unhappy with rendering our first list) to try and address your block and the other comments, please can you check the latest charter text to see if it resolves your block.

Thanks,
Rob


> -----Original Message-----
> From: iesg <iesg-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Michael Richardson
> Sent: 21 January 2021 16:07
> To: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>
> Cc: iotops-chairs@ietf.org; The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>; iotops@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [Iotops] Alissa Cooper's Block on charter-ietf-iotops-00-09:
> (with BLOCK and COMMENT)
> 
> 
> Alissa Cooper via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
>     > IOTOPS will solicit input on IoT-device-related operational issues
> and
>     > practices, and existing and proposed technologies related to the
>     > deployment, operational management, and lifecycle management of IoT
>     > devices.  IOTOPS provides a venue for IoT experts and other
> interested
>     > parties to engage in discussions of IoT requirements of networking
>     > standards, as well as proposals for new uses of IP technology in IoT
>     > specific scenarios."
> 
>     > Comparing this to the numbered list of work areas at the end of the
>     > charter, it seems that the objective is to be much more focused than
>     > the text above implies. I would suggest some edits to the text
> above,
>     > condensing down to one paragraph:
> 
> yes, hardly surprising since many points below were removed :-)
> 
>     > Is the list of WGs supposed to be limited or exhaustive? In addition
> to
>     > the missing ones others have pointed out there is TEEP.
> 
> Not exhaustive, maybe prefix with e.g.
> 
>     > OLD Revision, updates, and extensions related to existing WGs will
> be
>     > done in those WGs.
> 
>     > NEW Revision, updates, and extensions related to work in existing
> WGs
>     > will be done in those WGs.
> 
> I don't object, but I don't hold the pen.
> 
> --
> Michael Richardson <mcr+IETF@sandelman.ca>   . o O ( IPv6 IøT consulting )
>            Sandelman Software Works Inc, Ottawa and Worldwide
> 
> 
>