Re: [ipcdn] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC3083 (4048)

Michael StJohns <mstjohns@comcast.net> Fri, 11 July 2014 23:34 UTC

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Subject: Re: [ipcdn] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC3083 (4048)
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What a blast from the past.  

This is "not an error" , at least as reported.  Three are two places this error might have been reported from - the definition of  docsBpiCmAuthState and  the definition o fdocsBpiCmTEKState.  The former -  I believe correctly -does not include "start (1)" as one of its states.  The latter has "start (1),"  - e.g. including the comma.  So I'm not sure where he's actually seeing the error.

The  MIB  was verified at submission.  I would be surprised if there are any obvious syntactic errors like this in the body of the MIB.

If I remember correctly, the reason the "start" state was excluded from the docsBpiCmAuthState enums is that its never a visible state - the state machine doesn't actually exist until docsIfCmStatusValue is at least todEstablished - (RFC4546) and the state would always be later than "start" so any query about baseline privacy will not necessarily give you valid information prior to todEstablished.

Mike



At 11:02 AM 7/11/2014, RFC Errata System wrote:
>The following errata report has been submitted for RFC3083,
>"Baseline Privacy Interface Management Information Base for DOCSIS Compliant Cable Modems and Cable Modem Termination Systems".
>
>--------------------------------------
>You may review the report below and at:
>http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=3083&eid=4048
>
>--------------------------------------
>Type: Technical
>Reported by: Mark Ellison <ellison@ieee.org>
>
>Section: 4
>
>Original Text
>-------------
>start(1)
>
>Corrected Text
>--------------
>start(1),
>
>Notes
>-----
>errata # 334 for RFC3083 omits the necessary comma at the end of the inserted line 'start(1)'
>
>Instructions:
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>
>--------------------------------------
>RFC3083 (draft-ietf-ipcdn-mcns-bpi-mib-02)
>--------------------------------------
>Title               : Baseline Privacy Interface Management Information Base for DOCSIS Compliant Cable Modems and Cable Modem Termination Systems
>Publication Date    : March 2001
>Author(s)           : R. Woundy
>Category            : INFORMATIONAL
>Source              : IP over Cable Data Network
>Area                : Operations and Management
>Stream              : IETF
>Verifying Party     : IESG
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