RE: [ipcdn] Re: Last Call: draft-ietf-ipcdn-pktc-eventmess (ManagementEvent Management Information Base (MIB) for PacketCable- andIPCablecom-Compliant Devices) to Proposed Standard
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Subject: RE: [ipcdn] Re: Last Call: draft-ietf-ipcdn-pktc-eventmess (ManagementEvent Management Information Base (MIB) for PacketCable- andIPCablecom-Compliant Devices) to Proposed Standard
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Bob, Thanks for your close review and comments of this draft. Here are my reactions (as shepherd of this internet-draft). >In the DESCRIPTION clause of "pktcEventReset", it appears that "resetEvDescrTable(1)" is used mistakenly where "resetEventTable(1)" is intended I agree. I confirmed with one of the authors (Sumanth) that this is a typo. I would change 'resetEvDescrTable(1)' to 'resetEventTable(1)' in the last paragraph on page 10 of the draft. >Additionally, event the name of "resetEventTable(1)" for this particular BITS element is misleading, inasmuch as it resets (to factory defaults) only the "pktcEventText" column of the "pktcEventTable". Here I disagree. I believe that 'resetEventTable(1)' also resets the 'pktcEventSeverityLevel' and 'pktcEventReporting' columns -- since these two columns are read-write as well as 'pktcEventText'. -- Rich -----Original Message----- From: Natale, Bob [mailto:RNATALE@mitre.org] Sent: Monday, January 14, 2008 1:28 PM To: ipcdn@ietf.org Subject: [ipcdn] Re: Last Call: draft-ietf-ipcdn-pktc-eventmess (ManagementEvent Management Information Base (MIB) for PacketCable- andIPCablecom-Compliant Devices) to Proposed Standard In the DESCRIPTION clause of "pktcEventReset", it appears that "resetEvDescrTable(1)" is used mistakenly where "resetEventTable(1)" is intended (based on the repeated appearance of "resetEventTable(1)" in the OBJECT-TYPE definition and no other appearance of "resentEvDescrTable(1)" elsewhere in the MIB definitions). Additionally, event the name of "resetEventTable(1)" for this particular BITS element is misleading, inasmuch as it resets (to factory defaults) only the "pktcEventText" column of the "pktcEventTable". My recommendation would be to change "pktcEventText" to "pktcEventDescr" and rename "resetEventTable(1)" to "resetEventDescr(1)". Regardless, the naming needs to be harmonized. Cheers, BobN -----Original Message----- From: The IESG [mailto:iesg-secretary@ietf.org] Sent: Monday, January 14, 2008 12:45 PM To: IETF-Announce Cc: ipcdn@ietf.org Subject: Last Call: draft-ietf-ipcdn-pktc-eventmess (Management Event Management Information Base (MIB) for PacketCable- and IPCablecom-Compliant Devices) to Proposed Standard The IESG has received a request from the IP over Cable Data Network WG (ipcdn) to consider the following document: - 'Management Event Management Information Base (MIB) for PacketCable- and IPCablecom-Compliant Devices ' <draft-ietf-ipcdn-pktc-eventmess-12.txt> as a Proposed Standard The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits final comments on this action. Please send substantive comments to the ietf@ietf.org mailing lists by 2008-01-28. Exceptionally, comments may be sent to iesg@ietf.org instead. In either case, please retain the beginning of the Subject line to allow automated sorting. The file can be obtained via http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-ipcdn-pktc-eventmess-12. txt IESG discussion can be tracked via https://datatracker.ietf.org/public/pidtracker.cgi?command=view_id&dTag =9555&rfc_flag=0 _______________________________________________ IETF-Announce mailing list IETF-Announce@ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ietf-announce _______________________________________________ IPCDN mailing list IPCDN@ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ipcdn _______________________________________________ IPCDN mailing list IPCDN@ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ipcdn
- [ipcdn] Last Call: draft-ietf-ipcdn-pktc-eventmes… The IESG
- [ipcdn] Re: Last Call: draft-ietf-ipcdn-pktc-even… Natale, Bob
- RE: [ipcdn] Re: Last Call: draft-ietf-ipcdn-pktc-… Woundy, Richard