[ipcdn] draft-ietf-ipcdn-pktc-eventmess (-v14)
"Sumanth Channabasappa" <sumanth@cablelabs.com> Mon, 18 August 2008 13:42 UTC
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Folks, We have posted version -14 of draft-ietf-ipcdn-pktc-eventmess, (http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-ipcdn-pktc-eventmess-14. txt). This version incorporates the comments received from Pasi and Lars, based on the resolutions proposed by Rich Woundy and the co-authors. The changes are summarized at the end of this email. I have also included the results from IDNits verification and MIB compilation. - S Summary of changes: ------------------- #1: "The SYSLOG WG is obtaining a port number for SYSLOG over TLS that we will use as the DEFVAL for pktcEventSyslogPort." Specifically, the following change is suggested: DEFVAL { syslogs } -- RFC Editor - replace syslogs with the IANA-assigned -- SYSLOG over TLS port in [RFCCCC ] and remove this note #2: We also need to delete the following sentence from pktcEventSyslogAddress: 'The MTA SHOULD NOT attempt to route to a non-routable syslog IP address.' #3: Align labels for the textual convention SyslogSeverityMask with the syslog-tc-mib I-D (http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-syslog-tc-mib-08) These labels also appear in the DESCRIPTION text of pktcEventClassSeverity and pktcEventReporting. Editorial changes: = Updated Acknowledgements to add Pasi and Lars = Updated dates IDNits: ------ Checking boilerplate required by RFC 3978 and 3979, updated by RFC 4748: --------------------------------------------------------------------- No issues found here. Checking nits according to http://www.ietf.org/ietf/1id-guidelines.txt: --------------------------------------------------------------------- No issues found here. Checking nits according to http://www.ietf.org/ID-Checklist.html: --------------------------------------------------------------------- No issues found here. Miscellaneous warnings: --------------------------------------------------------------------- No issues found here. Checking references for intended status: Proposed Standard --------------------------------------------------------------------- (See RFCs 3967 and 4897 for information about using normative references to lower-maturity documents in RFCs) -- Possible downref: Non-RFC (?) normative reference: ref. 'PKT-SP-PROV' -- Possible downref: Non-RFC (?) normative reference: ref. 'RFCABC' -- Possible downref: Non-RFC (?) normative reference: ref. 'RFCAAA' -- Possible downref: Non-RFC (?) normative reference: ref. 'RFCBBB' -- Possible downref: Non-RFC (?) normative reference: ref. 'RFCCCC' -- Possible downref: Non-RFC (?) normative reference: ref. 'RFCDDD' -- Possible downref: Non-RFC (?) normative reference: ref. 'RFCEEE' -- Possible downref: Non-RFC (?) normative reference: ref. 'ITU-T-J176' -- Possible downref: Non-RFC (?) normative reference: ref. 'ETSITS101909-22' -- Possible downref: Non-RFC (?) normative reference: ref. 'IANA-ENTERPRISE' Summary: 0 errors (**), 0 warnings (==), 10 comments (--). MIB compilation results (http://www.ibr.cs.tu-bs.de/bin/smitools.cgi) --------------------------------------------------------------------- = The following are related to SYSLOG-TC-MIB: mibs/PKTC-IETF-EVENT-MIB:79: [2] {bad-identifier-case} `XXX' should start with a lower case letter mibs/PKTC-IETF-EVENT-MIB:79: [2] {object-identifier-not-prefix} Object identifier element `XXX' name only allowed as first element mibs/PKTC-IETF-EVENT-MIB:340: [2] {defval-syntax} default value syntax does not match object syntax = The following are related to PKTC-IETF-EVENT-MIB mibs/PKTC-IETF-EVENT-MIB:79: [2] {bad-identifier-case} `XXX' should start with a lower case letter mibs/PKTC-IETF-EVENT-MIB:79: [2] {object-identifier-not-prefix} Object identifier element `XXX' name only allowed as first element mibs/PKTC-IETF-EVENT-MIB:340: [2] {defval-syntax} default value syntax does not match object syntax Note: The first two are obvious. The last one is due to the recent change to the default port to reflect tls as the transport. _______________________________________________ IPCDN mailing list IPCDN@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ipcdn
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