RE: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC5458 (1747)

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All suggestions are OK for me.  Thanks.

Haitham 


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Subject: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC5458 (1747)


The following errata report has been submitted for RFC5458, "Security
Requirements for the Unidirectional Lightweight Encapsulation (ULE)
Protocol".

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You may review the report below and at:
http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=5458&eid=1747

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Type: Editorial
Reported by: Alfred Hoenes <ah@TR-Sys.de>

Section: 10.2, pg.17

Original Text
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   [GSE]       TS 102 606, "Digital Video Broadcasting (DVB); Generic
               Stream Encapsulation (GSE) Protocol, "European
|              Telecommunication Standards, Institute (ETSI), 2007.
                                          ^^

Corrected Text
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   [GSE]       TS 102 606, "Digital Video Broadcasting (DVB); Generic
               Stream Encapsulation (GSE) Protocol, "European
|              Telecommunication Standards Institute (ETSI), 2007.
                                          ^

Notes
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Rationale: distorting spurious comma.

The immediately preceding entry ('[ETSI-DAT]') is correct in this
respect, but it lacks the publication year.

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RFC5458 (draft-ietf-ipdvb-sec-req-09)
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Title               : Security Requirements for the Unidirectional
Lightweight Encapsulation (ULE) Protocol
Publication Date    : March 2009
Author(s)           : H. Cruickshank, P. Pillai, M. Noisternig, S.
Iyengar
Category            : INFORMATIONAL
Source              : IP over DVB
Area                : Internet
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG