[IPP] Subject: TIC has reviewed the IPP System Service v1.0 and has comments
William Wagner via ipp <ipp@pwg.org> Thu, 12 September 2019 02:54 UTC
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Subject: [IPP] Subject: TIC has reviewed the IPP System Service v1.0 and has comments
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Some minor things. Line numbers refer to PDF. line 791 “System Serviceand” should be “System Service and”. Line 1754 “Note: Appropriate Subunits are automatically associated with a new Printer object based on “printer-service-type”, inherent System capabilities, (out-of-band)System policies.” Add “and/or” before (out-of-band)? Also, don’t understand following sentence. Also, seems to be missing “)” . Unintended font change? Line 3471 “unique identier of the Resource” should be identifier? Line 3684 section Error! 3684Reference source not found. Thanks, Bill W.
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