Re: [ippm] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ippm-metric-registry-20

Hi,
I think that Al addressed most of them, noted the following are still not clear

Section 3 bullet 1 has RFC
Section 7.1.2  for "spec:" talks about RFC, should be more general say if the specification is RFC then ...
Section 7.1.2 talks only about RFC
Section 7.1.3
Section 7.1.7
Section 7.2 (In 7.2.1 talks about immutable document)
Section 7.3.1 end of the first paragraph
Section 8.1 first paragraph and third paragraph
Section 11.2
Section 11.3
Section 11.5.2  what is the requestor is it a document or person?

New comment:

In section 10.3 can the reference be a contact person since the policy is specification required

Roni Even

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Alissa Cooper [mailto:alissa@cooperw.in]
> Sent: Wednesday, December 04, 2019 8:00 PM
> To: Mirja Kuehlewind
> Cc: Roni Even (A); MORTON, ALFRED C (AL); Roni Even; gen-art@ietf.org; last-
> call@ietf.org; ippm@ietf.org; draft-ietf-ippm-metric-registry.all@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [ippm] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ippm-metric-registry-
> 20
> 
> Hi Mirja,
> 
> > On Dec 4, 2019, at 11:35 AM, Mirja Kuehlewind <ietf@kuehlewind.net>
> wrote:
> >
> > Hi Alissa,
> >
> > Section 10.1 say:
> >
> > Registration Procedure: Specification Required
> >
> > What else do you think is needed?
> 
> What I put in my ballot:
> 
> "I'm confused about what the registration policy is for metrics in the new
> registry. If it is Specification Required, then the places in the document that
> assume new metrics are defined in an RFC need to be generalized, because
> Specification Required need not involve any RFC at all.”
> 
> Best,
> Alissa
> 
> >
> > Mirja
> >
> >
> >
> >> On 4. Dec 2019, at 17:15, Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> wrote:
> >>
> >> Roni, thanks for your review. Al, thanks for your response. I entered a
> DISCUSS ballot to get the registration policy clarified.
> >>
> >> Alissa
> >>
> >>
> >>> On Nov 1, 2019, at 11:54 AM, Roni Even (A) <roni.even@huawei.com>
> wrote:
> >>>
> >>> Hi Al,
> >>> I saw that IANA was consulted during the work.
> >>> I was wondering what will be the actual text that will be written in the
> IANA registry, I expected section 10 to describe it.
> >>>
> >>> Registration Procedure(s)
> >>> Reference
> >>> Note
> >>>
> >>> I am not sure yet what is the Registration Procedure and what will
> >>> be written in the Note
> >>>
> >>> Thanks
> >>> Roni
> >>>
> >>> -----Original Message-----
> >>> From: Gen-art [mailto:gen-art-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of
> MORTON,
> >>> ALFRED C (AL)
> >>> Sent: Thursday, October 31, 2019 11:52 PM
> >>> To: Roni Even; gen-art@ietf.org
> >>> Cc: last-call@ietf.org;
> >>> draft-ietf-ippm-metric-registry.all@ietf.org; ippm@ietf.org
> >>> Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of
> >>> draft-ietf-ippm-metric-registry-20
> >>>
> >>> Hi Roni,
> >>> thanks for your comments, please see replies below.
> >>> Al
> >>>
> >>>> -----Original Message-----
> >>>> From: Roni Even via Datatracker [mailto:noreply@ietf.org]
> >>>> Sent: Tuesday, October 29, 2019 4:25 AM
> >>>> To: gen-art@ietf.org
> >>>> Cc: last-call@ietf.org; ippm@ietf.org; draft-ietf-ippm-metric-
> >>>> registry.all@ietf.org
> >>>> Subject: Genart last call review of
> >>>> draft-ietf-ippm-metric-registry-20
> >>>>
> >>>> Reviewer: Roni Even
> >>>> Review result: Almost Ready
> >>>>
> >>>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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> >>>> Document: draft-ietf-ippm-metric-registry-??
> >>>> Reviewer: Roni Even
> >>>> Review Date: 2019-10-29
> >>>> IETF LC End Date: 2019-11-06
> >>>> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> >>>>
> >>>> Summary:
> >>>> The document is almost ready for publication as a BCP document
> >>>>
> >>>> Major issues:
> >>>>
> >>>> Minor issues:
> >>>> 1. From reading the document it looks to me that the registration
> >>>> policy should be specification required which also requires expert
> review.
> >>> [acm]
> >>> I understand that perspective. In early review with IANA we decided on
> Expert Review partly because two elements of registry entries require
> references to immutable documents, such as standards specifications.
> >>> So the requirement for specifications could be seen as built-in.
> >>> But we may change to Specification Required now, the last IANA review
> is in-progress.
> >>>
> >>>> 2. My understanding is that for registration a document is required
> >>>> , not necessarily and RFC, but in multiple places in the document (
> >>>> 7.3, 7.3.1, 8.2 ,...) the text talks about RFC and not document.
> >>> [acm]
> >>> Yes, a few of those slipped through, thanks.
> >>>
> >>>> 3. I am not sure if section 6 is needed in the published document based
> on its content.
> >>> [acm]
> >>> it's fairly easy for new implementers to pick-up an IPPM RFC (even a
> STD) and choose parameters that meet their needs. But for the additional
> advantage of measurement comparisons, more context is needed. Some
> may even ask why this registry requires the many details. Answer: See
> section 6.
> >>> A little history is good. Very few have been joining IPPM sessions long
> enough to know this history.
> >>>
> >>>> If it will remain then in 6.1
> >>>> first paragraph the reference should be to section 5 and not to section
> 6.
> >>> [acm] ok
> >>>
> >>>> 4.
> >>>> In sections 10.2 and 10.3 there are guidance taken from this document.
> >>>> I think that the for IANA it should say in the registry note that
> >>>> the registration must comply with RFCXXX (this document), I assume
> >>>> that there is no need to repeat all this text in these sections in the
> registry note.
> >>> [acm]
> >>> I have said on a few occasions that almost the entire memo contains
> IANA Considerations. Nevertheless, we wrote and reviewed the memo and
> (then wrote) the separate IANA section with IANA's help.
> >>>
> >>> I have implemented the agreed changes above in the working version.
> >>> Thanks again!
> >>>
> >>>>
> >>>> Nits/editorial comments:
> >>>>
> >>>
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