Re: [ippm] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8912 (6755)

["MORTON JR., AL" <[e-mail]>]

+1, this might appear to be a "lot of text", but it is a consistency change = Editorial.

The first place we might fix this is in the related registry entries themselves.
Al


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> Thanks to Nikolai for this.
>  I think it's a reasonable editorial change to add the proposed sentence, for
> consistency with the other entries for the Performance Metrics Registry that
> are defined in this RFC.
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> Best wishes,
> Phil
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> > > The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8912, "Initial
> > > Performance Metrics Registry Entries".
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> > > --------------------------------------
> > > Type: Editorial
> > > Reported by: Nikolai Malykh <[e-mail]>
> > >
> > > Section: 5.3.5
> > >
> > > Original Text
> > > -------------
> > > 5.3.5.  Runtime Parameters and Data Format
> > >
> > >   Src:  The IP address of the host in the Src Role (format
> > >      ipv4-address-no-zone value for IPv4 or ipv6-address-no-zone value
> > >      for IPv6; see Section 4 of [RFC6991]).
> > >
> > >
> > > Corrected Text
> > > --------------
> > > 5.3.5.  Runtime Parameters and Data Format
> > >
> > >   Runtime Parameters are input factors that must be determined,
> > >   configured into the measurement system, and reported with the results
> > >   for the context to be complete.
> > >
> > >   Src:  The IP address of the host in the Src Role (format
> > >      ipv4-address-no-zone value for IPv4 or ipv6-address-no-zone value
> > >      for IPv6; see Section 4 of [RFC6991]).
> > >
> > >
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> > > --------------------------------------
> > > RFC8912 (draft-ietf-ippm-initial-registry-16)
> > > --------------------------------------
> > > Title               : Initial Performance Metrics Registry Entries
> > > Publication Date    : November 2021
> > > Author(s)           : A. Morton, M. Bagnulo, P. Eardley, K. D'Souza
> > > Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> > > Source              : IP Performance Measurement
> > > Area                : Transport
> > > Stream              : IETF
> > > Verifying Party     : IESG
> > >