Re: [ippm] Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-ippm-metric-registry-23: (with COMMENT)

"MORTON, ALFRED C (AL)" <acm@research.att.com> Sun, 26 January 2020 14:07 UTC

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From: "MORTON, ALFRED C (AL)" <acm@research.att.com>
To: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Thread-Topic: Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-ippm-metric-registry-23: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: Re: [ippm] Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-ippm-metric-registry-23: (with COMMENT)
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Thanks Alissa, I have made your recommended change in the 
working text version.

Al

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> Subject: Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-ippm-metric-registry-
> 23: (with COMMENT)
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> Alissa Cooper has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-ippm-metric-registry-23: No Objection
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> Thanks for addressing my DISCUSS and COMMENT.
> 
> In Section 7.1.2, I would recommend the following change for clarity:
> 
> OLD
> Spec: an immutable document, for RFCs, the RFC number and major section
> number
> that specifies this Registry entry in the form RFCXXXXsecY, such as
> RFC7799sec3.
> 
> NEW
> Spec: an immutable document identifier combined with a document section
> identifier. For RFCs, this consists of the RFC number and major section
> number
> that specifies this Registry entry in the form RFCXXXXsecY, such as
> RFC7799sec3.
>