[ippm] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-ippm-model-based-metrics-11: (with COMMENT)

Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com> Wed, 02 August 2017 23:23 UTC

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Date: Wed, 02 Aug 2017 16:23:35 -0700
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Subject: [ippm] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-ippm-model-based-metrics-11: (with COMMENT)

Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-ippm-model-based-metrics-11: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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The abstract is overly long (long enough to run onto the second page.) That
seems to detract from the purpose of an abstract. Can it be shortened to a
paragraph or two?

[ippm] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-… Ben Campbell