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Al, thanks for responding. I entered a = No Objection ballot. Alissa > On Feb 12, 2021, at 12:04 PM, MORTON, ALFRED C (AL) = wrote: >=20 > Thanks for your review, Stewart! >=20 > please see reply below, > Al >=20 >> -----Original Message----- >> From: Stewart Bryant via Datatracker [mailto:noreply@ietf.org] >> Sent: Friday, February 12, 2021 10:40 AM > ... >> Summary: A well written text ready for publication > [acm]=20 > Thanks! >>=20 >> Major issues: None >>=20 >> Minor issues: None >>=20 >> Nits/editorial comments: >> 8.4. Running Code >>=20 >> This section is for the benefit of the Document Shepherd's form, = and >> will be deleted prior to final review. >>=20 >> SB> I am wondering if this was supposed to be deleted before this = review, >> or whether you plan to keep it? > [acm]=20 > Yes, we'll certainly delete this section before the RFC Editors see = it. However, > there is a lot of review yet to happen. I really don't mind if the = IESG > sees it in some form, but we don't want to risk endorsing one = implementation, IIRC. >=20 > Also, this material could move to the Doc Shepherd's form, but has not = yet: > Document Quality: >=20 > Are there existing implementations of the protocol? ... >=20 > I see that we need to update the reference in section 8.4: > OLD > [udpst] AT&T, "UDP Speed Test Open Broadband project", August > 2020, >. > NEW > [udpst] udpst Project Collaborators, "UDP Speed Test Open Broadband = project",=20 > December 2020, = . >>=20 >>=20 >=20 > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > Gen-art@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art