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[ippm] Review on draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-data-06

Haoyu Song <haoyu.song@futurewei.com> Tue, 13 August 2019 00:00 UTC

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From: Haoyu Song <haoyu.song@futurewei.com>
To: "draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-data@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-data@ietf.org>, IETF IPPM WG <ippm@ietf.org>
Thread-Topic: [ippm] Review on draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-data-06
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Date: Mon, 12 Aug 2019 23:59:55 +0000
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Subject: [ippm] Review on draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-data-06
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Dear IOAM data authors and IPPM WG,

To sync up with the latest, I reread the draft and gave it a full review.
Some questions, comments, and suggestions are marked in the document.
Hopefully this can help to tighten the draft. 
Thanks!

Best regards,
Haoyu

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