Re: [ippm] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ippm-twamp-yang-13.txt

[Mahesh Jethanandani <[e-mail]>]

Hi Spencer,

> On Jul 10, 2018, at 11:59 AM, Spencer Dawkins at IETF <[e-mail]> wrote:
> 
> Dear Authors,
> 
> I think I'm within nanoseconds of sending an Approved note for this draft, but then noticed a couple of things I wanted to ask about first.
> 
> I noted that Tom Petch had flagged
> 
> Looking at -13, it has
>          bit unauth-test-encrpyt-control {
> which AM thought should be
>          bit unauth-test-encrypt-control {
> 
> which he had previously flagged in -12. 

Thanks for catching this. Yes it should be 
bit unauth-test-encrypt-control {

> 
> He also mentioned 
> 
> And s.5.2 has
> Advances Stream and Sampling Framework [RFC7312],
> which I think should be
> Advanced Stream and Sampling Framework [RFC7312],
> 
> Which seems to be new. 

Hmm. I seem to be missing his e-mail that catches that, but I can see it in the draft. So yes, it should be:

Advanced Stream and Sampling Framework[RFC7312],

> 
> Are these proposed changes correct? 

Yes.

> 
> Is this citation
> 
> 	   [UML]      ISO/IEC, "Information technology - Open Distributed	
>  	              Processing - Unified Modeling Language", April 2005.
> 
> sufficient for the expected reader? I noted that Adam's question mentioned "ISO/IEC 19501:2005", which seems like a helpful detail if someone were chasing the reference. 

Yes, I agree it would be helpful to have that reference.

> 
> Just let me know. I'm happy to do these as RFC Editor notes, if they're correct.

Thank you.

> 
> Spencer
> 
> On Mon, Jul 2, 2018 at 4:05 PM <[e-mail] <mailto:[e-mail]>> wrote:
> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the IP Performance Measurement WG of the IETF.
> 
>         Title           : Two-Way Active Measurement Protocol (TWAMP) Data Model
>         Authors         : Ruth Civil
>                           Al Morton
>                           Reshad Rahman
>                           Mahesh Jethanandani
>                           Kostas Pentikousis
>         Filename        : draft-ietf-ippm-twamp-yang-13.txt
>         Pages           : 68
>         Date            : 2018-07-02
> 
> Abstract:
>    This document specifies a data model for client and server
>    implementations of the Two-Way Active Measurement Protocol (TWAMP).
>    The document defines the TWAMP data model through Unified Modeling
>    Language (UML) class diagrams and formally specifies it using a NDMA-
>    compliant YANG model.
> 
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ippm-twamp-yang/ <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ippm-twamp-yang/>
> 
> There are also htmlized versions available at:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ippm-twamp-yang-13 <https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ippm-twamp-yang-13>
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-ippm-twamp-yang-13 <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-ippm-twamp-yang-13>
> 
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-ippm-twamp-yang-13 <https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-ippm-twamp-yang-13>
> 
> 
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