[ippm] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-direct-export-08

Meral Shirazipour via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Fri, 10 June 2022 21:18 UTC

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Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-direct-export-08
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2022-06-10
IETF LC End Date: 2022-06-14
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
[Page 10], Section 6, encpsulating --> encapsulating