Re: [ippm] WG adoption call for RFC8321bis and 8889bis

t petch <ietfa@btconnect.com> Fri, 08 April 2022 15:36 UTC

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To: Giuseppe Fioccola <giuseppe.fioccola@huawei.com>, Tommy Pauly <tpauly=40apple.com@dmarc.ietf.org>, IETF IPPM WG <ippm@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [ippm] WG adoption call for RFC8321bis and 8889bis
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On 08/04/2022 10:52, Giuseppe Fioccola wrote:
> Hi Tom,
> Thank you for your feedback.
> Please find my answers inline tagged as [GF].
>
> Regards,
>
> Giuseppe
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: ippm <ippm-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of t petch
> Sent: Friday, April 8, 2022 11:27 AM
> To: Tommy Pauly <tpauly=40apple.com@dmarc.ietf.org>; IETF IPPM WG <ippm@ietf.org>
> Subject: Re: [ippm] WG adoption call for RFC8321bis and 8889bis
>
> On 08/04/2022 09:42, t petch wrote:
>> On 08/04/2022 01:03, Tommy Pauly wrote:
>>> Hello IPPM,
<snip>
>>
>> 'this document'
>> Which document?
>>
>> Please post subsequent e-mails about one I-D only with the subject
>> line indicating which, else I will get confused (and may well confuse
>> others with my comments).
>
> I note that 'this document' fails to give any explanation of why it exists (beyond the boiler-plate that tells me it is obsoleting)?
>
> Why?  I may know the answer but think it wrong to assume that others will.
>
> This should be in the Introduction and there should also be a 'Changes from ...'
>
> [GF]: Sure. I will add the explanation in the introduction of both RFC8321bis and RFC8889bis. It is to elevate the Experimental RFCs to Standard Track. There are several implementations (e.g. https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-6man-ipv6-alt-mark/  that need a normative reference for the methodology. Our initial approach was to use the informative reference but it was not accepted by the IESG. Therefore it was suggested to obsolete the experimental docs with new standard docs.

Yes.  I have followed the thread and did voice my support for new RFC 
which I am glad to see.  And below ...
> Please note that, for both drafts, you can find the Changes Log in Appendix with all the modifications from the original RFCs for each version.
  ... Yes but that is not quite what I had in mind.   Think of an 
implementor who has accurately implemented RFC8321; they need to know if 
and how to change the code, they do not want a blow-by-blow account of 
every text change, how the RFC-to-be came to be what it is, just a 
statement of what needs changing where (if anything); and an Appendix 
labelled 'Changes Log', while helpful for the WG, is a candidate for 
excision by the RFC Editor whereas I am thinking of an Informative 
appendix that is referenced by the Introduction - 'Appendix X contains a 
list of technical changes from RFC8321'. Look at RFC7950; this lists the 
changes from RFC6020 and, at the insistence of the AD, the list was 
split into NBC and BC and was put up front.  Your changes are likely 
minor but I think that RFC7950 is a template of how to format a new 
version of a protocol.

Tom Petch

> Tom Petch
>
>>
>> Tom Petch
>>
>>> Best,
>>> Tommy & Marcus
>>>
>>>> On Apr 7, 2022, at 1:16 PM, Martin Duke <martin.h.duke@gmail.com> wrote:
>>>>
>>>> Hello IPPM,
>>>>
>>>> You may recall that there was a need to progress RFC8321 and RFC8889
>>>> from Experimental to Proposed Standard. There was a feeling that the
>>>> update would be trivial and we could therefore do it as an AD
>>>> sponsored document.
>>>>
>>>> I've done 3 rounds of AD review and I've seen the need to
>>>> substantially adjust the scope of these documents and tweak the
>>>> design in places. The changes are not revolutionary, but I'm a
>>>> non-practitioner and have driven some design changes with minimal
>>>> review. At this point I think it's important to get good IPPM
>>>> review; if we're going to do that anyway, we might as well do the
>>>> (expedited) working group process so that there's no confusion as to
>>>> why IPPM didn't formally review an update to its own documents.
>>>>
>>>> So, as first step, I invite the working group to adopt these two drafts:
>>>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-fioccola-rfc8321bis/
>>>> <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-fioccola-rfc8321bis/>
>>>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-fioccola-rfc8889bis/
>>>> <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-fioccola-rfc8889bis/>
>>>> Any objections to adoption, as always, should be to the value of
>>>> doing the work at all, and the general direction of the drafts. I
>>>> hope to follow up the adoption call with an immediate WGLC to shake
>>>> out any detailed objections, though we will take as long as we need
>>>> to address concerns that people have.
>>>>
>>>> I invite you to consult the changelogs on both of these documents,
>>>> which are not long, to get a sense of what we've done.
>>>>
>>>> For those of you who like diffs, there was a big reorganization
>>>> between draft-02 and -03 that is hard to follow in a diff. So here
>>>> is a set of diffs that exclude the -02 to -03 transition:
>>>> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=rfc8321.txt&url2=draft-fioccola-rf
>>>> c8321bis-02.txt
>>>> <https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=rfc8321.txt&url2=draft-fioccola-r
>>>> fc8321bis-02.txt>
>>>>
>>>> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=draft-fioccola-rfc8321bis-03.txt&u
>>>> rl2=draft-fioccola-rfc8321bis-04.txt
>>>> <https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=draft-fioccola-rfc8321bis-03.txt&
>>>> url2=draft-fioccola-rfc8321bis-04.txt>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=rfc8889.txt&url2=draft-fioccola-rf
>>>> c8889bis-02.txt
>>>> <https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=rfc8889.txt&url2=draft-fioccola-r
>>>> fc8889bis-02.txt>
>>>>
>>>> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=draft-fioccola-rfc8889bis-03.txt&u
>>>> rl2=draft-fioccola-rfc8889bis-04.txt
>>>> <https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=draft-fioccola-rfc8889bis-03.txt&
>>>> url2=draft-fioccola-rfc8889bis-04.txt>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> I believe it's up to the chairs to start the adoption call. If
>>>> people are good about reading the document during WGLC, I would like
>>>> to think we could be done before IETF 114.
>>>>
>>>> Your friendly Area Director,
>>>> Martin
>>>>
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