Re: [ippm] New Version Notification for draft-li-ippm-otwamp-on-lag-02.txt
Haoyu Song <haoyu.song@futurewei.com> Mon, 24 January 2022 17:06 UTC
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From: Haoyu Song <haoyu.song@futurewei.com>
To: Tianran Zhou <zhoutianran=40huawei.com@dmarc.ietf.org>, "IETF IPPM WG (ippm@ietf.org)" <ippm@ietf.org>
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WG, I think the scenario for LAG performance measurement is practical and the method is sound, so I support this work. For Figure 1, I think usually for load balancing with hashing, the number of links of a LAG would be power of two. Best, Haoyu Song -----Original Message----- From: ippm <ippm-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Tianran Zhou Sent: Sunday, January 23, 2022 10:23 PM To: IETF IPPM WG (ippm@ietf.org) <ippm@ietf.org> Subject: [ippm] FW: New Version Notification for draft-li-ippm-otwamp-on-lag-02.txt Hi WG, We think this is an useful work on adapting OWAMP/TWAMP in LAG performance measurement. We updated this draft based on the comments from the meeting discussion and mailing list. Thanks for all the suggestions. More reviews and comments are welcome. Cheers, Tianran -----Original Message----- From: internet-drafts@ietf.org [mailto:internet-drafts@ietf.org] Sent: Monday, January 24, 2022 2:17 PM To: Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com>; Guo Jun <guo.jun2@zte.com.cn>; Jun Guo <guo.jun2@zte.com.cn>; Rakesh Gandhi <rgandhi@cisco.com>; Tianran Zhou <zhoutianran@huawei.com>; Zhenqiang Li <li_zhenqiang@hotmail.com> Subject: New Version Notification for draft-li-ippm-otwamp-on-lag-02.txt A new version of I-D, draft-li-ippm-otwamp-on-lag-02.txt has been successfully submitted by Tianran Zhou and posted to the IETF repository. Name: draft-li-ippm-otwamp-on-lag Revision: 02 Title: One-way/Two-way Active Measurement Protocol Extensions for Performance Measurement on LAG Document date: 2022-01-24 Group: Individual Submission Pages: 13 URL: https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.ietf.org%2Farchive%2Fid%2Fdraft-li-ippm-otwamp-on-lag-02.txt&data=04%7C01%7Chaoyu.song%40futurewei.com%7Ca16115736bab48d99c2f08d9df020bed%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C0%7C637786022170908705%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000&sdata=O1SD54x5%2FM99g7YjxnzaMjaZuJ9S4UxNGcm6NAkTXng%3D&reserved=0 Status: https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fdatatracker.ietf.org%2Fdoc%2Fdraft-li-ippm-otwamp-on-lag%2F&data=04%7C01%7Chaoyu.song%40futurewei.com%7Ca16115736bab48d99c2f08d9df020bed%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C0%7C637786022170908705%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000&sdata=UYUXVf0BvrCuH20ydOjxCI26KjgpAopEIV40%2BqjuxKY%3D&reserved=0 Htmlized: https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fdatatracker.ietf.org%2Fdoc%2Fhtml%2Fdraft-li-ippm-otwamp-on-lag&data=04%7C01%7Chaoyu.song%40futurewei.com%7Ca16115736bab48d99c2f08d9df020bed%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C0%7C637786022170908705%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000&sdata=gN9hSIQaMM%2BE%2BtDLSFxe95J%2FyX4omBdv6rtBTMB4B8o%3D&reserved=0 Diff: https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.ietf.org%2Frfcdiff%3Furl2%3Ddraft-li-ippm-otwamp-on-lag-02&data=04%7C01%7Chaoyu.song%40futurewei.com%7Ca16115736bab48d99c2f08d9df020bed%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C0%7C637786022170908705%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000&sdata=NPJcFQoHUAw47%2FJ%2BO4SeOLEaQUNe%2FAI4UDUGMA%2BKK%2Fo%3D&reserved=0 Abstract: This document defines extensions to One-way Active Measurement Protocol (OWAMP), and Two-way Active Measurement Protocol (TWAMP) to implement performance measurement on every member link of a Link Aggregation Group (LAG). Knowing the measured metrics of each member link of a LAG enables operators to enforce the performance based traffic steering policy across the member links. The IETF Secretariat _______________________________________________ ippm mailing list ippm@ietf.org https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.ietf.org%2Fmailman%2Flistinfo%2Fippm&data=04%7C01%7Chaoyu.song%40futurewei.com%7Ca16115736bab48d99c2f08d9df020bed%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C0%7C637786022170908705%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000&sdata=DHVbIOrP6nfAfjGnIl5N%2F%2B5B0O6qDonb%2F%2Beq2uTEJu4%3D&reserved=0
- [ippm] FW: New Version Notification for draft-li-… Tianran Zhou
- Re: [ippm] New Version Notification for draft-li-… Mach Chen
- Re: [ippm] New Version Notification for draft-li-… Jeff Tantsura
- Re: [ippm] New Version Notification for draft-li-… Tianran Zhou
- Re: [ippm] New Version Notification for draft-li-… Haoyu Song
- Re: [ippm] FW: New Version Notification for draft… Aijun Wang
- Re: [ippm] FW: New Version Notification for draft… Tianran Zhou
- Re: [ippm] FW: New Version Notification for draft… Henrik Nydell
- Re: [ippm] FW: New Version Notification for draft… Tianran Zhou
- Re: [ippm] FW: New Version Notification for draft… Henrik Nydell
- Re: [ippm] FW: New Version Notification for draft… Tianran Zhou
- Re: [ippm] FW: New Version Notification for draft… Henrik Nydell
- Re: [ippm] FW: New Version Notification for draft… Tianran Zhou
- Re: [ippm] FW: New Version Notification for draft… Henrik Nydell
- Re: [ippm] FW: New Version Notification for draft… Tianran Zhou
- Re: [ippm] FW: New Version Notification for draft… Henrik Nydell
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