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Re: [ippm] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-ippm-metric-registry-22: (with COMMENT)

"MORTON, ALFRED C (AL)" <acm@research.att.com> Wed, 04 December 2019 17:34 UTC

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From: "MORTON, ALFRED C (AL)" <acm@research.att.com>
To: Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Thread-Topic: Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-ippm-metric-registry-22: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: Re: [ippm] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-ippm-metric-registry-22: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Roman,

Thanks for your comments, please see replies [acm] below,
Al


> -----Original Message-----
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> Subject: Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-ippm-metric-registry-
> 22: (with COMMENT)
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> Roman Danyliw has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-ippm-metric-registry-22: No Objection
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> COMMENT:
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> * Section 9.  Please consider adding something approximately along the
> lines of:
> 
> The aggregated results of the performance metrics described in this
> registry
> can reveal network topology information that might be considered
> sensitive.  If
> this is the case, access control mechanism should be applied.
[acm] 
OK, I added a slightly re-worded version in the working draft.

> 
> * Editorial Nits:
> - Section 7.1.2. Typo. s/obervations/ observations/
> - Section 7.1.3. Typo. s/formated/formatted/
> - Section 7.3.1.  Typo. s/unambigious/unambiguous/
> - Section 7.3.2.  Typo. s/wether/whether/
> - Section 7.3.5.  Typo. s/accomodated/accommodated/
> - Section 7.4.4.  Typo. s/calbration/calibration/
> - Section 8.1. Spacing. s/[RFC8126]policy/[RFC8126] policy/
> - Section 8.2.  Typo. s/Regsirty/Registry/
> - Section 8.2. Typo. s/unchamged/unchanged/
> - Section 9.  Typo. s/secuity/security/
> 
[acm] Thanks, all found and fixed.
[acm] I clearly have a keyboard that can't keep up - mostly missing letters...

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