[ippm] Opsdir telechat review of draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-ipv6-options-09

Tianran Zhou via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Mon, 28 November 2022 03:48 UTC

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Reviewer: Tianran Zhou
Review result: Ready

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of
the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in Telechat may be included in
AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other Telechat review comments.

I had some comments wrt the IPv6 deployment during the LC review. I looked into
this version, I think it resolved my concerns. I have no further question from
the operational point of view.

Cheers,
Tianran