[ippm] Comments on draft-fioccola-ippm-on-path-active-measurements
xiao.min2@zte.com.cn Thu, 15 August 2024 09:14 UTC
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Subject: [ippm] Comments on draft-fioccola-ippm-on-path-active-measurements
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Hi Giuseppe, Thank you for the interesting draft. As promised at IETF 120, I'd like to provide below comments for you to consider. Section 1, considering the purpose of this draft is to discuss the integration of active OAM tools and on-path telemetry options, I'm not sure ICMP needs to be mentioned as an active tool. AFAIK, there are no any on-path telemetry options defined for ICMP. Besides, MPLS LSP Ping and RFC 6374 are two candidates of applicable active tools to be mentioned here. Section 1.1, this draft has an intended status of Informational, so it seems this section can be removed. Section 2, s/next sections explains/next sections explain. Section 2.1, Figure 2, it seems to me MPLS LSP Ping is more appropriate than ICMP when applied to MPLS data plane. Section 2.2, s/it was also specified the TWAMP protocol/the TWAMP protocol is also specified. Section 3.1, a reference to draft-ietf-mpls-rfc6374-sr can be added as an example integrating MPLS active measurement tool and Alternate-Marking method. Best Regards, Xiao Min
- [ippm] Comments on draft-fioccola-ippm-on-path-ac… xiao.min2
- [ippm] Re: Comments on draft-fioccola-ippm-on-pat… Giuseppe Fioccola
- [ippm] Re: Comments on draft-fioccola-ippm-on-pat… xiao.min2