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Re: [ippm] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-direct-export-08

Tal Mizrahi <tal.mizrahi.phd@gmail.com> Tue, 14 June 2022 06:51 UTC

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From: Tal Mizrahi <tal.mizrahi.phd@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 14 Jun 2022 09:50:56 +0300
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To: Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com>
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Subject: Re: [ippm] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-direct-export-08
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Thanks Meral,

The nit will be fixed in the next version.

Cheers,
Tal.

On Sat, Jun 11, 2022 at 12:19 AM Meral Shirazipour via Datatracker
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> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
> Review result: Ready with Nits
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> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
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> Document: draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-direct-export-08
> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
> Review Date: 2022-06-10
> IETF LC End Date: 2022-06-14
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
>
> Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC.
>
> Major issues:
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> Minor issues:
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> Nits/editorial comments:
> [Page 10], Section 6, encpsulating --> encapsulating
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